Hello all, I need some help with this poem. I want to know if the English is okay... and if the poem is any good. I was simply going to post it with one of my images, but I wanted to see what you guys think about it first. So there it is: If I just hold him right now And wrap my arms around him And close my eyes And take a big breath Maybe time will stand still And this moment will never go never end never fade And he will never have to pull apart, And smile, And Go.