Forum: Bryce


Subject: Swan Lake - W.I.P

serendipity opened this issue on May 17, 2003 ยท 5 posts


serendipity posted Sat, 17 May 2003 at 7:40 PM

I had to compress this image a LOT to be able to post it, so if there are some jpg artifacts, I apologize. Anyway, this is my first complete render of this scene. I'm mostly satisfied with the composition, but still feel the lighting needs a lot of work. Any suggestions for giving this a better atmosphere? I also think I need to do something about the shoreline, but am not sure how to go about making it look less abrupt. Any and all suggestions for improvement welcome :)