Forum: Bryce

Subject: May Challenge WIP - Uncontrollable Forces -- "Urgent!"

derjimi opened this issue on May 23, 2003 ยท 13 posts

derjimi posted Fri, 23 May 2003 at 2:49 PM

Hi everybody, haven't done a challenge picture for long time. :-) Yesterday I had an idea, and here's the WIP: "Urgent!" Mankind discovers uncontrollable forces often. And having the body calling for relief with finding all doors locked is a bad thing. We all know this. ;) -- I wanted to keep it simple and sketchy - no try on realism this time. Please post your comments and critics and let me know how to improve it. Thank you! Greets, Jimi

woodhurst posted Fri, 23 May 2003 at 3:18 PM

this looks awesome. love the design and textures. maybe u could zoom into the guy more to make him the focus of the pic, or just crop it later on. either way, excellent work!

derjimi posted Fri, 23 May 2003 at 3:31 PM

Thank you very much. :-) I just discovered that I forgot to put some interior into the "toilet boxes". Have to fix that later. Zooming into the guy would really improve it on one hand, because it would be easier to see his face and would put the focus more on him. I tried to focus by using colors (dark clothing and red doorhandle). But if I zoom to much the room will show no more, and I want to show the bathroom as well. Thank you again - I will think over it! J.

ICMgraphics posted Fri, 23 May 2003 at 4:29 PM

ROTFLMAO I've been there!!! Being that I'm a professional coffee drinker. Oops wait a minute, hmm just stalls, no stand ups, pink sinks, Thats the ladies room! Yeah I've been there. Fantastic scene!!!

Rayraz posted Fri, 23 May 2003 at 4:33 PM

LOL. Great posinng and expression. I see he already pulled his hair out. He must be really stressed and waiting for quite a while. :)

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Doublecrash posted Fri, 23 May 2003 at 6:56 PM

LotOfLaughs! :) The pose is... dramatic as it should be!

DreamWarrior posted Sat, 24 May 2003 at 2:04 AM

LOL! I love it! My two cents: The edges on the guy are a bit jagged. Also, the coat should show a bit more gravity at the bottom. And a bit difference in the clothing pieces' colors would improve it, I think. Wonderful idea and render! I love the lights and the bathroom!


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SevenOfEleven posted Sat, 24 May 2003 at 10:21 AM

Looks great. Just missing one thing, Soap dispensers. People do need to wash their hands after using the bathroom.

Rayraz posted Sat, 24 May 2003 at 12:47 PM

Maybe some soft shadows? (if the render doesn't take too long.)

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derjimi posted Sat, 24 May 2003 at 1:01 PM

Yeah, you're right! I will overdo the coat, and definately add soap (we want our hands clean) and I was thinking of soft shadows, too. :-) Thank you! Greets, Jimi

Dash101 posted Sat, 24 May 2003 at 7:36 PM

LOL! Nice! Excellent Poser work. And a very very well put together image.. :) Im very impressed. Well done :) -dash

pauljs75 posted Tue, 27 May 2003 at 5:38 AM

Oh man, this one made me laugh. And the title fits it well too.

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EYECON posted Tue, 27 May 2003 at 8:30 AM

RIGHT ON! i had the same experience once, while watching the mAtrix for about 3 mins... i got the URGE! and i just can't help but supper for the next hour or so since i don't want to waste time in leaving for the comfort room... dangh!