Forum: Bryce


Subject: June Challenge WIP...Comfortably Numb

tjohn opened this issue on Jun 08, 2003 ยท 13 posts


tjohn posted Sun, 08 June 2003 at 4:22 AM

"...Relax...relax...relax, Just a little pin prick... ...There is no pain You are receding, A distant ship's smoke On the horizon..." I'm planning some texture and postwork, but this is the basic idea. Suggestions, please.

This is not my "second childhood". I'm not finished with the first one yet.

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tjohn posted Sun, 08 June 2003 at 4:25 AM

Sorry I didn't push the violence button in the first post.

This is not my "second childhood". I'm not finished with the first one yet.

Time flies like an arrow; fruit flies like a banana.

"I'd like to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather....not screaming in terror like the passengers on his bus." - Jack Handy


RodsArt posted Sun, 08 June 2003 at 4:45 AM

That's hot,the expression on his face is right on, pretty intense song & Scene. Maybe a lighting focus on his face darkening outward (where you can still see the rest of the scene though)?

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Innovator posted Sun, 08 June 2003 at 5:59 AM

pink floyd's comfortably numb! good choice of a tune, man ;-) One of my all time favs. great start, but yeah, make it darker and much more dramatic lighting.


Zhann posted Sun, 08 June 2003 at 6:10 AM

The brick wall could be dirter and crumbly, good start...

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Doublecrash posted Sun, 08 June 2003 at 6:46 AM

Whoa, great choice! I agree with the suggestions above, it could use a dirtier... wall, uh.


TheBryster posted Sun, 08 June 2003 at 7:18 AM Forum Moderator

Didn't he shave his eyebrows? Run to the bedroom In the suitcase on the bed You'll find my favourite axe....!

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BecSchm posted Sun, 08 June 2003 at 8:34 AM

If you change the lighting or wall texture, please don't let it change the shadows/reflections of the needles on the wall. Those look really great.


tjohn posted Sun, 08 June 2003 at 8:50 AM

The bricks are too small, so I plan on increasing their size, also plan to "grunge-up" the wall a bit (but it has to be brick and the bricks have to be white, Floyd fans know why). The skin texture is too healthy-looking, too. What do you think about blood streaks running down the wall?

This is not my "second childhood". I'm not finished with the first one yet.

Time flies like an arrow; fruit flies like a banana.

"I'd like to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather....not screaming in terror like the passengers on his bus." - Jack Handy


DreamWarrior posted Sun, 08 June 2003 at 10:02 AM

That's great, Tjohn! I would bend his head a bit, though. It takes some strengh to have the head straight if you're "tired" :-)


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ttops posted Sun, 08 June 2003 at 6:56 PM

:)


EYECON posted Mon, 09 June 2003 at 1:28 AM

thats gotta hurt....OUCH!


TheBryster posted Mon, 09 June 2003 at 8:08 AM Forum Moderator

TJohn: Great idea! We have the same taste in music. I posted a PF pic too...........I just wish I was comfortably numb....

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