tjohn opened this issue on Jun 08, 2003 ยท 13 posts
tjohn posted Sun, 08 June 2003 at 4:22 AM
This is not my "second childhood". I'm not finished with the first one yet.
Time flies like an arrow; fruit flies like a banana.
"I'd like to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather....not screaming in terror like the passengers on his bus." - Jack Handy
tjohn posted Sun, 08 June 2003 at 4:25 AM
Sorry I didn't push the violence button in the first post.
This is not my "second childhood". I'm not finished with the first one yet.
Time flies like an arrow; fruit flies like a banana.
"I'd like to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather....not screaming in terror like the passengers on his bus." - Jack Handy
RodsArt posted Sun, 08 June 2003 at 4:45 AM
That's hot,the expression on his face is right on, pretty intense song & Scene. Maybe a lighting focus on his face darkening outward (where you can still see the rest of the scene though)?
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Innovator posted Sun, 08 June 2003 at 5:59 AM
pink floyd's comfortably numb! good choice of a tune, man ;-) One of my all time favs. great start, but yeah, make it darker and much more dramatic lighting.
Zhann posted Sun, 08 June 2003 at 6:10 AM
The brick wall could be dirter and crumbly, good start...
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Doublecrash posted Sun, 08 June 2003 at 6:46 AM
Whoa, great choice! I agree with the suggestions above, it could use a dirtier... wall, uh.
TheBryster posted Sun, 08 June 2003 at 7:18 AM Forum Moderator
Didn't he shave his eyebrows? Run to the bedroom In the suitcase on the bed You'll find my favourite axe....!
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BecSchm posted Sun, 08 June 2003 at 8:34 AM
If you change the lighting or wall texture, please don't let it change the shadows/reflections of the needles on the wall. Those look really great.
tjohn posted Sun, 08 June 2003 at 8:50 AM
The bricks are too small, so I plan on increasing their size, also plan to "grunge-up" the wall a bit (but it has to be brick and the bricks have to be white, Floyd fans know why). The skin texture is too healthy-looking, too. What do you think about blood streaks running down the wall?
This is not my "second childhood". I'm not finished with the first one yet.
Time flies like an arrow; fruit flies like a banana.
"I'd like to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather....not screaming in terror like the passengers on his bus." - Jack Handy
DreamWarrior posted Sun, 08 June 2003 at 10:02 AM
That's great, Tjohn! I would bend his head a bit, though. It takes some strengh to have the head straight if you're "tired" :-)
ttops posted Sun, 08 June 2003 at 6:56 PM
:)
EYECON posted Mon, 09 June 2003 at 1:28 AM
thats gotta hurt....OUCH!
TheBryster posted Mon, 09 June 2003 at 8:08 AM Forum Moderator
TJohn: Great idea! We have the same taste in music. I posted a PF pic too...........I just wish I was comfortably numb....
Available on Amazon for the Kindle E-Reader
All the Woes of a World by Jonathan Icknield aka The Bryster
And in my final hours - I would cling rather to the tattooed hand of kindness - than the unblemished hand of hate...