Forum: Bryce


Subject: need feedback on this image

svenberg opened this issue on Jun 14, 2003 ยท 10 posts


svenberg posted Sat, 14 June 2003 at 5:32 PM

i would like for someone to give me some feedback on this image... what can i add to it, any problems with it, etc...

Claymor posted Sat, 14 June 2003 at 6:17 PM

I have something similar in process with several spots rather than just one. I think you need some floor material to show up here though...looks like the stand is floating on air.


ttops posted Sat, 14 June 2003 at 6:33 PM

Yep some definition to the floor would be great. Nice volumetric/visible light :)


foleypro posted Sat, 14 June 2003 at 7:03 PM

Excellent Atmospheric render...Yep I agree ya needs to have some flooring showing around the base and maybe some Objects in the background but Shaded so you can barely make them out...Still a very good render...Did ya get those effects?


TheBryster posted Sat, 14 June 2003 at 8:13 PM Forum Moderator

The Lady Sings The Blues........This just begs for a lady to stand there and sing...........

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Claymor posted Sat, 14 June 2003 at 9:53 PM

whoa...I do that too...


pakled posted Sat, 14 June 2003 at 11:01 PM

yup..a musician, or a singer..shadowed face to go with the lighting, give it a great mood..

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Graviton posted Sun, 15 June 2003 at 5:29 AM

I love the mood. You really get the impression of the lone voice of a standup comedian or prehaps a singer in a smokey jazz club. Good stuff, Grav

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burgi posted Fri, 27 June 2003 at 10:24 AM

don't put a person in the scene. it'll ruin it. just add a better floor


svenberg posted Sat, 09 August 2003 at 4:33 PM

Thank you very much for all of your feedback, i really appreciate it.