Forum: Bryce

Subject: WIP - scene illustration for project "Death's Hero"

arabinowitz opened this issue on Jun 22, 2000 · 4 posts

arabinowitz posted Thu, 22 June 2000 at 9:36 AM

This is a scene for a project I'm working on, entitled "Death's Hero." I copyrighted the treatment for this last year, and my skills are starting to get to the point where I can create somewhat decent scenes for the written stuff. How's the lighting and color in the image. Any other constructive criticism would help. Thanks. Aharon

Inkwolf posted Fri, 23 June 2000 at 2:43 PM

I guess nobody has any criticism--looks pretty good to me!

arabinowitz posted Fri, 23 June 2000 at 3:34 PM

Thanks. I was starting to think nobody was here anymore. But I actually am looking for some constructive critism...

lilmikee posted Mon, 26 June 2000 at 5:52 PM

The scene looks good.Although I think the lighting could use some more work. the two by the pillars look a bit too sharp compared to the rest of the scene.Also the wall or the pillars could use some aging somehow with the texture (looks too new).