Parkie opened this issue on Jul 05, 2003 ยท 7 posts
Parkie posted Sat, 05 July 2003 at 11:49 PM
xoconostle posted Sat, 05 July 2003 at 11:58 PM
Yes! Such an attractive scene. I thought this was very pretty the first time around, and you did indeed improve upon it. As a very minor observation, the lower half of the gorilla, especially to the right, appears to be missing. I know this is only an illusion, and am not sure if it really matters, but perhaps if you could see a bit more of the animal's legs or hindquarters, or if there was another bit of vegetation to cover that space, the anomoly wouldn't catch the eye. I really like how the water doesn't call too much attention to itself. The color, turbulence, and reflection look juuuuust right. Great work!
Djeser posted Sun, 06 July 2003 at 2:48 AM
Yes, much better. Very nice image.
wabe posted Sun, 06 July 2003 at 3:24 AM
Yes, much better. A "very nice" from me too!
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Parkie posted Sun, 06 July 2003 at 6:38 AM
Thanks Wabe, Djeser and Xoconostle. Xoconostle, It is vegitation covering the gorillas. I had thought to move the one in the back further to the left and further back to make it more visible but over looked it. It was intended to have some vegitation obscuring the gorillas. Have fun Neil
jstro posted Sun, 06 July 2003 at 9:52 AM
Excellent! The new lighting is a big improvement. jon
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Parkie posted Mon, 07 July 2003 at 1:31 AM
Thank you Jon. I'm pleased with it. Cheers Neil