FearaJinx opened this issue on Jul 07, 2003 ยท 8 posts
FearaJinx posted Mon, 07 July 2003 at 5:28 PM
SAMS3D posted Mon, 07 July 2003 at 5:37 PM
I assume that is blood on the wall, I would also think it might be more smeary and not in the same pattern. I like the lighting, but the room looks to clean...maybe add some dust to your lights to tone it down a bit. Good start and I am by far not a critique, just things that I would notice. Sharen
MeInOhio posted Mon, 07 July 2003 at 7:43 PM
I think the blood prints are too even as well. Like the fingers were all the same length. There are two blood prints on the wall and then one on the light. They seem rather far apart with nothing in between. Like a body. I wouldn't think most people would have windows like that with no curtains. And the ceiling seems rather high for most of the rooms I inhabit. Although I do have a friend who has a living room with high ceilings. But it's still a nice job. And I don't claim to be right in what I saw, so don't change it because of me. You're the artist. And this is your creation. Kevin
Jlbrown907 posted Wed, 09 July 2003 at 12:31 PM
Hi FearaJinx,
I think both of the above posts kind of hit on the same thing. The scene is beaconing for more detail. The environment itself seems to be a bit sterile, too clean.
Conceptually, I like your image. It's original and thought provoking.
Please don't take my opinion too seriously. I have never posed one picture here, but I hope to in the future.
Jesse
FearaJinx posted Wed, 09 July 2003 at 12:54 PM
Thank you! These are all things I'm working into it. It's looking much much better! Jinx
runwolf13 posted Wed, 09 July 2003 at 1:45 PM
I love the concept. Here are my suggestions More broken things. Clearly this was a violent murder. A chalk outline, such as the police have already come and gone? A broken window. Add to the drama. lower the viewing angle, it'll make it look more ominous. Great job!
FearaJinx posted Thu, 10 July 2003 at 8:40 PM
Thank You!!!!!!!!!!!! This is going to be one kill picture!!!!! Jinx
whbos posted Mon, 14 July 2003 at 1:25 PM
A nice texture for the floor would be nice so it isn't the same as the wall color. Where's the body? If not a body, maybe a bloody arm extending slightly from the bottom left or right of the scene. I'm working on a murder scene myself. It must be something in the water. TrekkieGrrrl has a morphing puddle which can be used for blood.
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