jacoggins opened this issue on Aug 07, 2003 ยท 7 posts
jacoggins posted Thu, 07 August 2003 at 7:58 PM
DHolman posted Thu, 07 August 2003 at 9:00 PM
Hmmmm....it looks a little flat, but hard to tell. Will take a look again when the sun goes down.
gallimel posted Fri, 08 August 2003 at 3:22 AM
I love the visual impact of it. Yes, it does look a bit flat, but in a way, it gives me exactly so the feeling of emptiness and waiting.. so connected with towns in Summer, that all looks desertic. I also love a lot the purity of the composition. Very modern, very geometrical. I guess if you had stepped just a couple of steps behind it would have been a lil more deep, and maybe lookin less flat. But... Well, I can't be sure :) I like this anyway :)
PunkClown posted Fri, 08 August 2003 at 7:07 AM
I really like it as is...but have you tried more contrast to emphasize the starkness, the empty feel that Meli has alluded to? :-)>
3DGuy posted Fri, 08 August 2003 at 12:25 PM
it has some bad rescaling artifacts. Very visible along the sidewalk lines. I guess you resized from very large to this in one go?.
Maybe a tad more contrast..
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firestorm posted Fri, 08 August 2003 at 1:55 PM
hi, maybe more contrast and maybe try toning it. although i think it looks ok, i would probably have tried an angled shot to add more depth.
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Michelle A. posted Fri, 08 August 2003 at 5:18 PM
Composition wise I like it......strong geometric shapes are always appealing to me. As others have suggested maybe more contrast to give it a bit more boldness, but otherwise I find it to be quite nice.
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