Forum: Bryce


Subject: need feedback on this image

svenberg opened this issue on Sep 20, 2003 ยท 7 posts


svenberg posted Sat, 20 September 2003 at 4:39 PM

please give me feedback on this image. suggestions on what to add to it, problems with it, etc... aything would be helpful.

Ang25 posted Sat, 20 September 2003 at 5:21 PM

I really like the POV on this. I'm having some trouble seeing what the guy is doing although I have a crappy monitor so it just may be me. I think the helicopter needs a different texture, it looks too grey IMO. The snow looks good, it would look excellent if it were elongated which would give it the sense of falling and also, I can't see any snow in the bottom half of the render. So far this is looking really cool, is it for the monthly challenge, some historical jail break or something? Angela


svenberg posted Sat, 20 September 2003 at 5:45 PM

No, no historical jailbreak, but thanks for recommending it for the monthly challenge, that really makes me feel good. But I think I'll change it according to everyone's feedback before i do. By the way, thanks for yours. Keep 'em comin'!


d_hood posted Sat, 20 September 2003 at 7:11 PM

I think it looks really good. If you do enter it, you might want to change the model of the helicopter. It looks hightech and unless the jail break was fairly recent, the model wouldnt look right. Maybe make it a "behind enemy lines" image. Looks to me they are saving a p.o.v. Very good job on it.


d_hood posted Sat, 20 September 2003 at 7:12 PM

p.o.w.* (prisoner of war)***


Jaymonjay posted Sat, 20 September 2003 at 8:21 PM

Unless you want the helicopter to look as though it is crashing, you might want to add some motion blur to its rotors.


svenberg posted Tue, 23 September 2003 at 4:03 PM

yeah, i noticed that, would anyone know how to create better snowflakes, too? and how would i go about applying motion blur to the rotors? im not that experienced when it comes to post-production.