Alright, took the suggestions and did the easier of them. Thigh morphs Look over shoulder Added Skin Texture Changed color of dress Altered both hands Altered face Things I still want to do. Lighting effects - Filters (I know nothing about this so thought would do it last) Twisting the body more realisticaly. What do you think?

Oh I forgot to mention! Jim burton has some of the best stuff! I really dont like the short dressed that come with Poser. Nor the long puffy dressed. Give me more long dresses like yours Jim! that's awesome! As soon as I can scratch the cash together I'm getting that dress and textures for it!

heyas; this is coming along nicely. she's much more animated and alive, and i like the hair showing the motion of her head. good job.

much bettre... Check around for some hair transparancies... they make the hair look a lot more "real".. you might try moving the right leg back a bit... so it looks even more like she was startled I.e. you stop but the body still mves a bit past.. all in all a great improvement... keep up the good renders..