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Subject: Need some feedback on a WIP plz

thcseller opened this issue on Feb 02, 2004 · 13 posts

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thcseller ( ) posted Mon, 02 February 2004 at 7:04 PM · edited Mon, 25 November 2024 at 1:51 PM

Been working on this for a while... it is a 3d representation of my actual bathroom and im kinda trilled cause its really starting to look like it is in real life. As mentioned this is a WIP so the lighting is totally off (only put 1 radial light in middle so i can see) Kinda looking for some feedback on this... could really help me finish it in a nice way =)

catlin_mc ( ) posted Mon, 02 February 2004 at 9:00 PM

Small pane of glass up top on the window is over the metal shower rail and looks a bit off, sort of Mad Magazine kind of style. 8) Catlin

ocddoug ( ) posted Mon, 02 February 2004 at 10:04 PM

Excellent layout, very nice so far. I think the mats on the toilet and counter could be better. This would look nice with a radial dome, but of course that'd take forever to render.

MuddyGrub ( ) posted Mon, 02 February 2004 at 10:51 PM

Wow. It's looking fantastic. Love the detail you've put into it. The only thing I can see that might be worth trying is having the curtain hanging inside the tub, instead of outside. I think that would add some more depth to your scene. Did you do any of the models? It's gonna look excellent finished!

thcseller ( ) posted Mon, 02 February 2004 at 11:08 PM

thanx for the idea of putting the curtain inside the bath i think idd look great. About the models, toothpaste tube, tap and toilet bowl are imported everything else is mine including textures thanx for the comments

TheBryster ( ) posted Tue, 03 February 2004 at 8:30 AM

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I'd resize the floor tiles and move the window to the left of the pic, it looks like the shower-curtain rail is attached to the glass...........

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corys311 ( ) posted Tue, 03 February 2004 at 8:31 AM

You've got a butterfly in your bathroom?? Come on bro! Pretty good work, I've thought about trying to lattice-model a toothpaste tube before, I think now I'm gonna give it a shot Cory BS

thcseller ( ) posted Tue, 03 February 2004 at 2:57 PM

hehe bryster i must admit ur comment is true but i wanted to reproduce my bathroom like it really is and... (believe it or not) the curtain's pole is indeed fixed to the window... and yes i have a purple neon butterfly in my bathroom, if other lights are off all my bathroom becomes purple LOL i thought about doing a further pic with these lighting conditions... anyways thanx for the tips