zhounder opened this issue on Feb 11, 2004 ยท 17 posts
zhounder posted Wed, 11 February 2004 at 10:00 PM
enax posted Wed, 11 February 2004 at 10:09 PM
I remember your photos of the New Years Eve and they were perfects in light, with a beautiful light... and models. I like this one and I think that it is more "artistic".
Misha883 posted Wed, 11 February 2004 at 10:12 PM
Very moody. Like the softness and mystery, unconventional pose.
enax posted Wed, 11 February 2004 at 10:19 PM
Yes, I forgot it, as Misha says, very moody.
firestorm posted Thu, 12 February 2004 at 1:13 AM
yes, very "arty" and moody. i like the pose and the tousled hair. i would try either cropping it over the top and to the right so that no backgroud is visible or add a little more to the right side if it is available. hope this is helpful to you :)
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Wivelrod posted Thu, 12 February 2004 at 3:38 AM
I think it looks a little "steamy", if you know what I mean. Alost like she's in a sauna (in a slinky dress, surreal :P ). Very moody indeed. As far as I'm concerned, this image has been rescued :)
Misha883 posted Thu, 12 February 2004 at 8:42 AM
...don't change the cropping! IMHO
Misha883 posted Thu, 12 February 2004 at 8:43 AM
from what it is here. Perfect!
3DGuy posted Thu, 12 February 2004 at 12:29 PM
I can only agree with the others. Nice rescue :) I like the softness and framing.
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bwitzel posted Thu, 12 February 2004 at 1:57 PM
I think it turned out very well! Good work! :)
Michelle A. posted Thu, 12 February 2004 at 3:49 PM
Beautiful, soft, dreamy looking.... The crop I like it as is.... but the crop Ronesh suggests may work too... I think your rescue worked!
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unstrung65 posted Thu, 12 February 2004 at 5:31 PM
....I think if you cropped the top ( about two thirds down through the hair silhouette portion ) -- it would make a nicer composition -- the unruly hair around the face is more pleasing than the top -and works well.
Dizzie posted Thu, 12 February 2004 at 5:47 PM
Heck Yeah it works for me....I love the Dreamy softness to it!
TomDart posted Thu, 12 February 2004 at 10:35 PM
Humm.I would likely crop a bit. The distance from the right eyebrow to the hair, leave about that much of the hair and crop. To me, this brings it together. As it is , I do like this image. Where do you meet these ladies! LOL! God Bless. TomD'art.
DHolman posted Fri, 13 February 2004 at 3:37 AM
This has a very good feel to it, color-wise. I like the softness and "steaminess" of it. I see some suggestions for cropping it a bit tighter, I'd probably go the other way. Give a little bit more on the right side of the image so that you get to see a bit of the shape of her shoulder as it curves downward, but not too much because I think the blank space on the left side adds a lot to this composition. -=>Donald
Tedz posted Fri, 13 February 2004 at 7:56 AM
I wish I could get such good effects with My Headless Barbie Model in My Bathroom....when I try to get this Steam effect....My Electricity Bill goes Sky High. Rescue Me :]
danob posted Fri, 13 February 2004 at 5:20 PM
Hmm I like the overall effect and yeah Grain/Noise can produce some nice artzy images.. Composition wise it looks good esp the hair.. I would if it were me show a bit more of the right shoulder perhaps to the point of the downstrap of the dress.. Danny
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