shadowdragonlord opened this issue on Feb 20, 2004 ยท 8 posts
shadowdragonlord posted Fri, 20 February 2004 at 2:16 PM
TheBryster posted Fri, 20 February 2004 at 3:41 PM
1st impression........how about a flock of birds spiraling around the crystal's light....?
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RodsArt posted Fri, 20 February 2004 at 3:59 PM
I can't quite place it...The sky & terrains are fantastic, atmosphere is perfect. Something about the main focus...the tower/beacon has a subtle structure yet it's terrain base does not match the rest of the terrains which are sharp & craggy. maybe roughen that surface a bit or give the tower some kind of extended supports like fins or legs.(more ominus?) does that make any sense? Just thinking out loud. my .02
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ysvry posted Fri, 20 February 2004 at 8:16 PM
great lotr like pic. maybe add a viking like ship and a jetty to add some intrest to the water part and some camp fires on the shore.
hewsan posted Fri, 20 February 2004 at 9:57 PM
Really cool work. Something about the way the base of the tower joins the land, could experiment in post of making this less regular... especially on the left end. Like the way you handle light and shadow. Nice one. best, hewsan
TheBryster posted Sat, 21 February 2004 at 7:34 AM
I've gotr problems with this too. I keep thinking I've seen this before. Maybe the crystal should be brighter.........
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Innovator posted Sat, 21 February 2004 at 8:11 AM
great start SDL, my only thoughts for improvement would go along with what the others have said about the tower (I assume the focal point). I think it should stand out more...either by making the beam/crystal brighter or the Tower just larger and more overpowering But I love this atmosphere and the POV excellent
Swade posted Sat, 21 February 2004 at 9:55 AM
If atmosphere is what you were looking for.... you sure have accomplished that. 8) I would have to agree with what has been said about the tower as well.... Wonderful start on a great image. Wade
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