Hi, I'm just starting up a poser based comic and I wanted to get some constructive criticism from the folks here so as to improve my work in future. So I'm posting a couple of my first pages for you all to go to work on. Caveat: Since this is a comic, I'm definitely facing a trade off between expediency and beauty. I realize not all my panels are going to be exemplary works of art, but in order to produce a story (which is the main thing) in a reasonable amount of time, I can't really afford to spend days on each panel. Therefore, I'm trying to do as little postwork as possible, and may need to take shortcuts, or settle for less than optimal results in some cases. Don't worry, there will be panels that get special attention, and I'll post some of those for serious critiquing when I do. So again my main emphasis is effectively conveying the story, I'd like to do so in as attractive a way as possible also. So with that in mind, I'm really interested in being shown glaring errors, or things that could be done better in a general way so that my future panels look better. Also I realize these two panels arent' exactly the most exciting things you'll ever see, but they're necessary to establish some character, plot and that kind of thing. Anyway, have at it, I'll appreciate any and all feedback as long as its even remotely thoughtful. Thanks in advance, Unzipped