Attached Link: http://www.renderosity.com/contest.ez?contest_id=321&ShowQuestion=9998

Now April's contest is over (I didn't want to ask while it was running incase it looked like I was trying to gain votes), I wondered if anyone could give me feedback on my entry? Especially what was bad about it and what could be improved, because I thought most of it was really good and expected to sweep the board on the challenge! (well....not quite, perhaps hoped!)