This is a scene that is in progress (Wings3D, Bryce, UV-Mapper & Photoshop). I would appreciate comments before I work any further with it. The original is about 2000 * 800 pixels. It feels a bit stupid to post this so "late" because I've seen that everybody is making star fields and painting planets nowadays. The scene & spaceship is based on the opening "scene" from the sci-fi comic book: Yanns adventures - The planet of Illusions (1978). Pls give me feedback and comments! /anders

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hmm.. what i think about this?! it has the your style and your standard, personally I find lighting on the spacecraft very effective and with drama. maybe if you want to work on it a bit more, add some city lights on the planet surface (assuming it is a colonized planet...)

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Terrific! This kind of stuff never goes out of style, not in MY universe. Great detailing on the ship.

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Brilliant, I love this kind of picture. Can't give you any ideas, cos I like it as it is.

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I think it's just fantastic. But if you want some C&C for a space scene post it at Solar Voyager and see what they have to say. Dave (Bambam131) posts there a lot.

looks great to me..hmm..any site bambam131 posts to..;)

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It is great, but maybe one technical detail that could be ignored since no one has noticed it yet. The planet looks like it is more than 50% engulfed in light. Unless there are two suns here it looks a little strange in my eyes. Maybe I'm just crazy. Like I said, it doesn't matter a whole lot because no one else has noticed it yet.

thanks all! Here's the next version. Changed the composition a bit...

Message edited on: 06/21/2004 13:15

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Much better, this way you can't really tell the lighting on the planet and the focus is on the spaceship more. (duh, as if you couldn't tell that) I really like the detail on the back of the ship, it looks great. Now that I think about the extra light I commented on in my last post, could that be credited as atmospheric glow?

Excellent modeling and texture mapping bazze! I like your background too.

Excellent step forward in terms of composition. Love the detailing on the model btw.

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Possible suggestions (if it were me, I'd have to try them out before deciding, you may be able to decide more easily): 1. Try moving the planet down (or the viewpoint up) such that the curve disappears out of the bottom of the picture (and doesn't reappear; ie move such that the upward curve on the left vanishes). 2. (Having done 1) Move the spaceship up or down and a little to the left (that bright exhaust is one of the centres of attention - as I understand it, theory says it shouldn't be on the centre-line). 3. Add some fuzziness/blur/"matter being ejected effect" to the exhaust. (It may not be physically correct, but...) Or leave it alone - great pic!! (And I agree about the detailing.) Cheers, Diolma