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Subject: Please give comments to my first two poems

InVert opened this issue on Jul 02, 2004 · 4 posts
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InVert ( ) posted Fri, 02 July 2004 at 9:32 AM · edited Sun, 01 December 2024 at 12:24 PM

Attached Link: http://www.renderosity.com/viewed.ez?galleryid=700198&Start=1&Artist=InVert&ByArtist=Yes

You will find them in my Gallery on the images "Left Behind" and "Another Day". They are very important to me. Thanks :) http://www.renderosity.com/viewed.ez?galleryid=707501&Start=1&Artist=InVert&ByArtist=Yes

meico ( ) posted Tue, 06 July 2004 at 1:20 PM

Been to view and left [hopefully] helpful comments.

InVert ( ) posted Tue, 06 July 2004 at 1:25 PM

Thank you a lot for commenting. And I am sure every comment helps :) The second one I left less focused since I am planning to put it into a song... what do you think?

meico ( ) posted Tue, 06 July 2004 at 1:35 PM

Ah, right ... in that case the repetition may well work for you, indeed it's probably essential.

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