Forum: Writers


Subject: Please give comments to my first two poems

InVert opened this issue on Jul 02, 2004 ยท 4 posts


InVert posted Fri, 02 July 2004 at 9:32 AM

Attached Link: http://www.renderosity.com/viewed.ez?galleryid=700198&Start=1&Artist=InVert&ByArtist=Yes

You will find them in my Gallery on the images "Left Behind" and "Another Day". They are very important to me. Thanks :) http://www.renderosity.com/viewed.ez?galleryid=707501&Start=1&Artist=InVert&ByArtist=Yes

meico posted Tue, 06 July 2004 at 1:20 PM

Been to view and left [hopefully] helpful comments.


InVert posted Tue, 06 July 2004 at 1:25 PM

Thank you a lot for commenting. And I am sure every comment helps :) The second one I left less focused since I am planning to put it into a song... what do you think?


meico posted Tue, 06 July 2004 at 1:35 PM

Ah, right ... in that case the repetition may well work for you, indeed it's probably essential.