Forum: Writers


Subject: Deja Vu

airlynx opened this issue on Jul 19, 2004 ยท 10 posts


airlynx posted Mon, 19 July 2004 at 10:33 AM

I woke up in the middle of the night and scrawled this out on a sheet of paper. I beleive it would make an awesome opening paragraph to a story, but I'm not sure what. Tell me what you think and where you think it should lead. I was thinking about elaborating on the last sentence there, making that the ultimate destination of the story, but the details are very fuzzy. I think deja vu should be a key player in the story judging from the first line. ------------------ I have often felt like I am reliving my life. Like it has been written somewhere in a book and I am just reading it, remembering what Ive done. I have broken every childhood promise Ive made. When I was young I swore to myself that Id never smoke, drink, or do drugs. So far Ive done all of them. I also prophesized that Id become famous and die young. So far those havent come true, but I still believe in them.