draculaz opened this issue on Jul 29, 2004 ยท 7 posts
draculaz posted Thu, 29 July 2004 at 10:07 PM
Attached Link: http://www.renderosity.com/viewed.ez?galleryid=728442&Start=1&Artist=draculaz&ByArtist=Yes
DJB posted Fri, 30 July 2004 at 12:35 AM
What happens if this makes the Hot20 ?
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zandar posted Fri, 30 July 2004 at 1:40 AM
Hi. What kind of advice are you looking for? Constructive crits? Or do you have a pending question. I'm not a Bryce user, so I'd be of little use regarding technical advice, but anything to do with the asthetics of the render itself I'd be more than happy to contribute to. :-)
One reason I like visiting this particular bryce forum is the willingness it's users seem to have at improving their works and accepting constructive critiques from "outsiders" so to speak. That, and the fact I'm a former Bryce3D user myself, and still have an interest in observing the application's progression.
PS: I saw your post in the 3dsMax forum, and I have what you're looking for if you haven't obtained it already. Let me know.
Message edited on: 07/30/2004 01:49
TheBryster posted Fri, 30 July 2004 at 8:48 AM
This is a really interesting pic! The circular walkway however could be improved by adding more people - walking, strolling - but ignoring the guy who's already there....perhaps also something of real interest (to the guy) - outside, maybe a BIG aircraft.....?
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Vile posted Fri, 30 July 2004 at 10:00 PM
Great image until you get to the poser dork. 1st his clothing looks so 20th century boring...or hey maybe retro... no because even when retro is done it still looks modern to the times. He is very out of place other then his bald head because everyone knows that FutureMan will be bald. The city is a bit bland as well more color or textures. Nice POV, great textures inside.
Incarnadine posted Sat, 31 July 2004 at 7:31 AM
Small suggestion, add some radial tile detail to the walkway floor, perhaps some panel bump map to the walls. Needs a bit more viual detail IMO. Twist the poser figures right leg a bit more forward, it will lessen the slight awkwardness of his stance. Ver cool idea and a good setup so far. Please continue with this!
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Incarnadine posted Sat, 31 July 2004 at 7:38 AM
Went back and took a further look, it does grow on you. It actually makes me want to do one (grin). Maybe a sign or two in or above the corridor.
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