Forum: Bryce


Subject: My mountain mist WIP..tried new view, is it any better?

chohole opened this issue on Sep 22, 2004 ยท 10 posts


chohole posted Wed, 22 September 2004 at 5:32 AM

Pogmahone suggested that maybe I alter the front cliff, so it appeared the viewer was actually standing on it. I ended up with this, had to add some more terrains to the vista. Have this silly idea of maybe having a Lochness monster type thingy emerging from the mist, but feel that would maybe spoil it. ANyway would be grateful for any comments.

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hedgey posted Wed, 22 September 2004 at 6:09 AM

Looks great just the way it is imho, a Lochness monster thingy would disrupt the peaceful, serence feeling the scene evokes for me. cheers James


hedgey posted Wed, 22 September 2004 at 6:11 AM

make that serene feeling! Haven't felt serence for awhile now ;)


pogmahone posted Wed, 22 September 2004 at 7:57 AM

Looking good! There's a great feeling of distance...


draculaz posted Wed, 22 September 2004 at 8:02 AM

the other one was better in my opinion


shadowdragonlord posted Wed, 22 September 2004 at 8:06 AM

Oh wow...! Make it bigger for us? Perhaps adjust the contrast a bit, to bring out more color...? I really like what you've done here, it feels downright Jurassic.


TheBryster posted Wed, 22 September 2004 at 8:37 AM

Ask Catlin about the LN Monster....btw, where is Catlin, don't think we've heard from her for ages?

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Gog posted Wed, 22 September 2004 at 10:17 AM

I wouldn't go with a monster, but how about a traditional little crofter's house with some smoke from the chimney off in the distance.

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electroglyph posted Wed, 22 September 2004 at 4:30 PM

I like it but I think the haze is a bit too high The foreground needs to be a little bit sharper. The green in the grass is a little too bright unless it's spring rye.


brittmccary posted Wed, 22 September 2004 at 8:59 PM

Oh. I like the water-coloury feeling this gives. Personally I don't think it needs anything more. Good work!