tjohn opened this issue on Oct 09, 2004 ยท 9 posts
tjohn posted Sat, 09 October 2004 at 7:32 AM
This is not my "second childhood". I'm not finished with the first one yet.
Time flies like an arrow; fruit flies like a banana.
"I'd like to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather....not screaming in terror like the passengers on his bus." - Jack Handy
TheBryster posted Sat, 09 October 2004 at 7:47 AM
This is great! but I'd have tucked his front legs under his body.......to reduce drag!
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Ang25 posted Sat, 09 October 2004 at 8:42 AM
:^D
mrscience posted Sat, 09 October 2004 at 9:48 AM
LOL! Awesome man! I agree with Bryster but it's pretty good as it is! One personal preference - perhaps put some animals on the sidelines or a crowd to cheer them on like in a Cross-Country race or something?
mrscience posted Sat, 09 October 2004 at 9:50 AM
Also maybe put a white line in the sand or a white ribbon for the finish "line", come to think of it...
tjohn posted Sat, 09 October 2004 at 11:29 AM
Thanks for the feedback. :^)
This is not my "second childhood". I'm not finished with the first one yet.
Time flies like an arrow; fruit flies like a banana.
"I'd like to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather....not screaming in terror like the passengers on his bus." - Jack Handy
pogmahone posted Sat, 09 October 2004 at 12:41 PM
I think maybe you need to make it more obvious that there's two separate jets of flame coming from the exhausts. You could probly do it in post? At the moment the flames look a bit liquid.... Otherwise great!!! Good job on morphing the cat :^)
brittmccary posted Sat, 09 October 2004 at 8:49 PM
lol you stole my idea!!! Ack! BUT it's comforting to know that you'll do it much better than I could have!
drawbridgep posted Mon, 11 October 2004 at 9:03 AM