Well i done a total makeover on the car,including a new paint job.Re-done the background and moved it farther back,also moved the flame content almost behind the car and finally took it to PS and redone all the effects of blur and motion. Hope ya like it.Comments always welcome.Can i re-enter this in the challenge and withdraw my last entry? Thanx.. __=WARNLADE=__

Yup. AS will take your latest entry as your final.

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All the Woes of a World by Jonathan Icknield aka The Bryster

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make the car shinier, i think...it looks too dull...more reflectivity, perhaps? Very cool, though...i like it.

Much better! Two things, however: the lightning bolt type thingie keeps dragging my gaze away from the rest of the image. I'd either tone it down, or better yet, remove it all together. Secondly, try a smooth on the car model; the jaggies around the foglights are killing me. :)

I hope there is at least a driver hiding inside the car! He needs to sit up and take a peek at how fast he is going!

Jeeze Louise, I'm afraid to say anything this time round, because my last suggestion disimproved what you had :o( I wished that I'd kept my big mouth shut :o( Seems like the car is very far over towards the left margin of the picture, but I'm not an expert on composition. And could do with being much shinier. It definitely looks better than your in-between posting, though.

I'm just interested in how he got that affect on the background?