Attached Link: http://www.renderosity.com/viewed.ez?galleryid=816928&Start=1&Artist=TobinLam&ByArtist=Yes

That's a lot of acronyms! I had posted a WIP a while ago and made some changes and posted the finished product today. I want some criticism that doesn't concern the table legs, I think I forgot to turn down the ambience on them. Anything else would be appreciated. I would like to keep the gallery comments free of criticism(even constructive criticism) as that would probably ruin the mood.

seen on a lptop..pretty dark. really dark.. lots of black.. barely make out the rose..xept for the brighter parts of the red, and the bottle. The top part of the bottle has disappeared. if the chair near the rose is supposed to be a chair.. in this light..it looks like a strange piece of wooden thing.. be a dear..before I say more.. and you want to throw things at me.. light up the image a bit more. add in another candle..and have the flame give light instead of just burning.

even on my desktop it is dark, might be better off using some lighting on it from the left handside of the image.

Message edited on: 11/22/2004 21:21