Warblade opened this issue on Nov 27, 2004 ยท 7 posts
Warblade posted Sat, 27 November 2004 at 10:21 PM
LunarTick posted Sat, 27 November 2004 at 10:24 PM
well apart from the foreground i like it.
xenic101 posted Sun, 28 November 2004 at 1:08 AM
Too many clothes on the sorceress. Oh, and its hard to tell whats going on. Did she summon a sword upside down so the dragons blocking the hilt? Great texture on the dragon.
RodsArt posted Sun, 28 November 2004 at 2:04 AM
Changing the Crop would give the scene alot more power.
This scene can handle "Even" negative space on all 4 sides. You can use the moon for your center. Slight tex noise on the snow, and less blur on the sorceress robe. The Robe is a great Touch (shows movement too) and also a good balance for the color in the dragon. If you want to keep a foggy forefront, you'll have much more control using very subtle clouds in Postwork.
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Excellent Fantasy Piece!!
ICM
Message edited on: 11/28/2004 02:08
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draculaz posted Sun, 28 November 2004 at 3:57 AM
i messed with daz once. drac (i didn't call the next day)
TheBryster posted Sun, 28 November 2004 at 8:16 AM
I think the moon would be better place further back and re-coloured slightly to give it a more etherial look. 0.02p
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shadowdragonlord posted Mon, 29 November 2004 at 1:28 AM
Both dragon and sorceress look wonderful, aside from compositional issues, you've got a great start...!