Attached Link: http://w1.680.telia.com/~u68006915/

lol my first homepage, it fetures 3 artists here, have any tips on what to add or whats wrong with it? Free high res textures is gonna be added at least =)

Message edited on: 11/28/2004 21:11

Looks great. On dial up so I didn't look at everything but the style is consistent. And you got three great artists on there. That's not the XBox logo on there, is it? I suspect Microsoft might have some sort of copyright on it.

You might want to get with Niklas about his Stridsvagn F-85. It doesn't look like the render finished. Those bullets really look a lot like the xbox logo. Their cool but you should probably find new ones. The "Back" images should say "Home" beause that is where they lead. There needs to be links on the pages with the large images to the artist gallery and possibly the home page. A little bit closer spacing on the home page and the three main areas will fit in one screen. Smaller font size could help with that. Those are the only problems I could find with a quick look. Those artists are good. Remember, every page should have a link to the home page and a link to the page before it.

I love the look of the site, and love the scribbly navigation, guestbook graphics etc. My only crit would be that the navigation menu on the main page doesn't sit well with the scribbled navigational drawings elsewhere - the red table borders are a bit too formal. That's just my opinion, though........ great galleries too.

Also, a minor thing - "characters" is the proper spelling. I used to proofread at one of my jobs,so I notice things like that.

lol thatnx you guys, now I need to start making some changes :D