Forum: Writers


Subject: Feed back

boodah30 opened this issue on Nov 30, 2004 ยท 2 posts


boodah30 posted Tue, 30 November 2004 at 1:33 PM

I would like feed back the good, bad and the ugly. Thanks to all who post.

A Fresh Start

Maybe a fresh start is what we need. Certainly a
fresh start eventually there will be. Either
from Mother Nature herself or out of man's hate
and greed, a fresh start there will be indeed.
The Big Picture is nowhere to be seen. We should
be the stewards of this place as opposed to the
parasites we have been, raping this planet of
everything in site, reaching up to the heavens
wanting to feed our voracious appetites. Open
our hearts and use all of the sun's shine,
prepare for the future generations and there
generations in time. Lets not let us be the
last, its time to wake up and learn from the
past. A fresh start is sure to arrive embrace
it, fear it, but love to survive.

Jeffrey B. Torres


Wolfspirit posted Wed, 01 December 2004 at 3:13 AM

I enjoyed the read. Not sure what I think about the story in it yet, as I am still absorbing it. I know I sound like a sponge" Smile" but anyhow, I will stop back by and let you know when I have had more time to think about all of what you have wrote herealthough it flows well I can say that much right now as the way I perceive this line - but love to survive- to me at this given moment said it all Thanks for sharing.