Hi guys, I've been working on something and i really need your critiques on it.

First, I'm not sure if it's appropriate for me to put this here (as a collage? dunno).

Secondly, I'm not satisfied with what i have created. I'm stuck. would like suggestions/input/feedback...
tell me what you like/don't like about this as a whole. i wrote the poem many years ago.

I really wanna do this one right. As for image...well, i didn't want to photograph a homeless person...just don't feel comfortable with it. so i took a pic of the ground...hoping people will use their imaginations...

maybe i should go with a winter scene? a pine tree or something. HELP!!! thanks guys.

Message edited on: 12/02/2004 22:08