Greetings! I'm working on a piece of art for a book cover and I'd really appreciate some constructive criticism. The book is an anthology of unicorn stories that will be published in 2005. I'll thank everyone by name within the book. I really need some feedback, folks, but please be honest--be brutal--be constructive. I'm not looking for a "looks great!" or a "that sucks!". I need suggestions for improvement. Thank you! Mark-Wayne Harris