Forum: Bryce

Subject: Space Ship 02 (.W.I.P.)

darkness_02 opened this issue on Jan 29, 2005 ยท 16 posts

darkness_02 posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 4:01 PM

Hello all... Well I've been playing around with this one a bit.. I removed them wings and have added a few more texters and a few exit 4 the little ship... I'd like your comments on wot u think to it and any ways I can make it many better... thanks from darkness

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Rayraz posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 4:14 PM

How about adding something asymetrical somewhere to the ship? something more radically shaped, to break up the box look?

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darkness_02 posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 4:26 PM

like wot?? I new to creating ships so I don't know wot u mean... thanks darkness

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Rayraz posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 4:34 PM

Anything that makes the object les square basically :) Either wings, or cutting a part out of the hull and connecting a new object and attaching it somewhere else to the ship. And if you want to be a little more daring maybe make just one wing on one side instead of one on each side?

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darkness_02 posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 4:37 PM

how about a wing right at the front under the window... ??? just a small one like... ?? think that would make it better ???

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Rayraz posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 4:48 PM

Could be :) maybe make the landing bay a bit more sticking out at the side of the ship :) but not too boxy, maybe use more angled surfaces for it to add some interest to the design. You could attach it to that wing under the front window with some less bulky maybe, or make a bull piece at the end of the wing and connect it to the landing bay with some tubes.

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Rayraz posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 4:57 PM

a little example of how you can make use of several shapes combined to make a more interesting structure :)

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darkness_02 posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 5:48 PM

Thanks Rayraz for ur advice.... I've been playing around with it a bit and I'd like to know wot u now think to it... Thanks from darkness

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Rayraz posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 6:05 PM

ooh that is defenitely a nice improvement!

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darkness_02 posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 6:18 PM

or mabe wot about the new front end and a over few bits to go with it... coming togeter nice right ???

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Rayraz posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 6:26 PM

oh defenitely! I like the new front end :)

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darkness_02 posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 6:35 PM

any tips on the window... ???

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MoonGoat posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 6:42 PM

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Wow, darkness, you're really getting better. When it comes to spaceships, check Drawbridgep's gallery for conceptual merriment. From there, browse the website from your favorite space video game. ;)

TheBryster posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 7:29 PM

Lots of nice ideas here....!

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pakled posted Sat, 29 January 2005 at 9:42 PM

one thing you might consider is the bottom...it looks like a flat plane. This could actually be some sort of high-tech locomotive (another idea..;) but I'd do some extrusions, expanding, etc., to give it some depth, and a more finished look. Keep em coming..;)

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lordstormdragon posted Sun, 30 January 2005 at 5:20 PM

Better and better, Darnkess... Progress makes you feel good, don't it!??!