Forum: Writers


Subject: In memories of my father

Olenkamajka opened this issue on Jan 31, 2005 ยท 3 posts


Olenkamajka posted Mon, 31 January 2005 at 1:32 AM

-- dedication to my father, Aleksander Szulakiewicz, June 15.2003 -- [ In memories of my father ] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Under silken blanket I'm holding in my heart, my sparkling feellings, father... today You are a ghostly light. Now You belong to Heaven, I'm crying in the rain, my tears dropp with rain drops, my soul is black pain. With a candle in my hand and a rose from deepest love... today I'm far away, I'm sending words...my dove. I'm holding memories of Your words and charming face, my love is under a blanket, in my heart... with silk and lace. ....dedication to my father, Aleksander Szulakiewicz Edmonton, June 15.2003


tjames posted Sat, 05 February 2005 at 4:00 AM

The touch and sentiment are wonderful. As far as the words there are a few choppy parts.


Olenkamajka posted Sun, 06 February 2005 at 9:37 PM

Thank you, and more from me to You...I did learn english by my self only in Canada, a did not got it in shool as a second language. I have just few poems in english Ola