Hi, I'm watching the Fame Story, something like music academy, reality here in Greece and I wanted to send a picture to my favorite contestant, Periklis. He's such a good person but the rest of the players, 4 to be exact, are giving him a very hard time because he's very popular and they think they're so much better than him. They, the 4 others, like to call themselves Dinosaurs since they're in the game for 6 months. Anyway I made this but something doesn't fit and I can't pinpoint what. Can you give me any suggestions, even if it's tottaly drastic, anything at all? I want it to be perfect but I just don't lke it. This is the first draft so it's a little coarse. Thank you:)