tankred opened this issue on Jan 18, 2001 ยท 6 posts
tankred posted Thu, 18 January 2001 at 12:02 PM
Escuridao posted Thu, 18 January 2001 at 1:26 PM
This is just a thought, but the sea bottom looks a little plain... maybe you could add some animal life, corals, small rocks... something to liven up the floor in front and underneath the merman... maybe some small rising bubbles too... just throwing out some ideas for you :) Really cool picture already though... I like the terrain...
Prizm Break posted Thu, 18 January 2001 at 3:09 PM
nfredman posted Thu, 18 January 2001 at 5:16 PM
i only mention this because i, myself, often need to do the same thing. Ask yourself, where is he? What ocean, and where? What's he doing? How long has he been underwater (if he breathes air), and what's he thinking? If he's in the Caribbean (suggested by the pretty blue water) he might be fooling with fishies hiding in a coral reef. And, what kind of bottom does kelp grow on? A sandy flat bottom or a rocky one? (i don't actually remember seeing any kelp on the coral reefs in the Caribbean, come to think of it.) What kind of fishies go with that plant life? This story business makes it more fun to do, engages the viewer, and helps you figure out details to add. As Bill Fleming says, the real world is imperfect. Add some dirt and cracks and algae and stuff. And a few air bubbles, if he's an air-breather merman. And he looks lonely. He might need a merrow friend or something. Nonetheless, i applaud your effort. And... how do you like the book? i've barely begun to wade through it. --Nan
Stuie posted Fri, 19 January 2001 at 12:25 PM
Apache2k posted Sun, 21 January 2001 at 4:37 PM
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Check my webpage,, there is a section tutorial,, underwater scenes,, Hope it will help u some.. You have nice pictures....