Forum: Poser - OFFICIAL


Subject: RE: Please critique this image. My second attempt.

lplp1 opened this issue on Jan 21, 2001 ยท 4 posts


lplp1 posted Sun, 21 January 2001 at 6:44 PM

Hi Thanks all for the very helpful feedback. "bongo", I want to first make a personal apology to you, as you can see, I have taken your advice. I appreciate your comments and feedback. I will have to figure out what "post fix" means. Is post fix simular to airbrush or touchup? "Don" I appreciate your comments and feedback. "joeyb", the look/style of the hair is a work in progress, however I am glad you pointed it out. The bikini top is part of the Jim burton SMV bundle. I changed the tex color of the bra, which gave me lace the effect you see. I appreciate your comments and feedback. "bloodsong" the hello tag was what I thought was a friendly reference I made to the community after the word hello in my initial greeting. The Hi-rise hands, is that part of Poser4? The buttocks skin, do I need to use photo shop to even out the skin, or is there a way to do this in P4? I appreciate your comments and feedback.

Bongo posted Sun, 21 January 2001 at 7:46 PM

I was trying to be funny about the "hello" thing. I like your picture and my only advice is to NOT TAKE TO MUCH ADVICE. You have a good eye for shape and composition, following to much advice will lead to your pictures looking like everyone elses - we already have a bunch of those.


chaosphaere posted Mon, 22 January 2001 at 6:36 AM

I like this pic. I won't critique the Poser technique, but from the point of view of just artwork, it's great. The camera angle is powerful, the character has attitude and sass. The hair looks like woven copper, which is kind of cool, lends it just a little bit of the cyberpunk feel.


joeyb posted Sat, 27 January 2001 at 7:08 AM

I like how you changed the top, it does look better this way. I have to agree with Bongo, when I'm working on a model, I try to only fix 2-3 things at a time, and not get too focused on a big list. Keep working on it, you'll get it the way you want it soon!