Well, I posted this a couple of times in the galleries, at various stages in development, in the vain hope of getting some suggestions for improvement. No such luck...Nothing useful. Although I thank the people that posted compliments:) I am basically looking for some of the better artists around here to comment on the scene so I can get a second opinion. I think I'm getting close to the point where I can't improve it anymore, so I'm hoping that fresh eyes will spot anything I've missed. A wee bit of explanation. The scene is meant to be set some time in the future. And yes, her panties are meant to be glowing like that:) Why are they glowing?? No idea. Just thought it would look nice. Same thing with some of the jewelry she's wearing. Now for those who've read Reality Dysfunction, this is supposed to be Ione Saldana. I think I got pretty close to my image of what she would look like. Except for the ears which I just added because I felt that they looked cool :) So, any and all commments and suggestions will be appreciated and taken into consideration. I left the file large for a reason, I want you guys to be able to see all the details. Oh and no postwork has been done on this. Everything rendered in Cinema 4D XL 6, figure is Zygote's Victoria, the room is the Turretroom downloaded from Scifi 3D, wineglass and book from Freestuff and Propsguild. Couch and the rest is mine. The texture is Emily from Freestuff. Thanks to all those without whom I would never have gotten this made. regards Ian Wendt