Forum: Bryce


Subject: WIP, need more feedback!

thenodemaster opened this issue on Jan 31, 2001 ยท 3 posts


thenodemaster posted Wed, 31 January 2001 at 7:16 PM

Well, I took some of RG's advice and toned down the curtains and the pink outfit to make the dragon stand out more. However, I still need to work on the lighting, but it is an outdoor scene--I know, I know: what's up with the bed? I liked the whole concept of it in the middle of a garden or forest set-up. Anyhoo, should I put ground fog in the forground grass? I am planning on having some light rays filter in from the left and shine onto the girls and their dragons and have a few more dragons in the scene causing trouble...

Deathbringer posted Thu, 01 February 2001 at 12:20 AM

Heres a little input for what its worth. It seems to me that the water in the back is running right upto the edge of the bed..almost onto the top of it.. If that is the effect you wanted then its working if not I am not sure what you want to add to break it but something needs to devide it. Hope that helps a little


blafe posted Thu, 01 February 2001 at 2:25 PM

I agree with Deathbringer, also the dragon on the lap needs a lizerdlike texture rather than plain green...