Forum: Writers


Subject: Hi! Please let me know what you think!

digitalgrey opened this issue on Jun 06, 2005 ยท 3 posts


digitalgrey posted Mon, 06 June 2005 at 9:13 AM

Attached Link: http://www.renderosity.com/viewed.ez?galleryid=973567&Start=1&Artist=digitalgrey&ByArtist=Yes

Please give an opinion, it would really be appreciated whether good or bad. Thankyou Graeme

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SusiQ posted Thu, 09 June 2005 at 1:05 AM

Very nice. Words are very expressive. That sentence "Two poisoned tongues leave two broken hearts." is amazing. It brings the mental imagery to life. Maybe you can make the next one flow a little smoother? Just my humble opinion though. Keep up the great work...

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digitalgrey posted Mon, 13 June 2005 at 3:43 AM

Thanks so much I really value the comment

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