Hey everyone! Dido6 and I haven't gotten the poetry challenge up yet dude to all the craziness on the technical end. However, I thought I'd start up a little fun mini-challenge for all those people who can't get enough haiku in their life ;) With the start of the Fall season, I thought it would be fitting to have a little game with haiku! If you don't know what haiku is, check out this site: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku SO, here are the rules of our little game. In the next post, I'll start us off with a haiku. The next person that writes their haiku MUST use the last word of my haiku as the first word of their haiku. Example: First Entry - On an autumn day The colors shift the spectrum Life's endless circle Example: Second Entry - Circle turning round Horizon inviting fire Until the day ends Now those entries were pretty serious. Feel free to use any theme or topic for your haiku you want! Just keep it civil and have fun. :)

Hot as summer days Broiling in September heat Is this really Fall?

Fall says play is wrapped Warm wraps on the horizon Bright wrapping unboxed

Unboxed and set free, Old Man Winter's coming tide Brings a welcome chill. Yeesh, unboxed was tough ;)

"From hard nuts grow strong trees." Good job, midreal.

Chill in morning air Hoarfrost glistens on the grass Crops ripe in dun fields

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.

The warm wind whispers
Soft enchanting melodies
through the Autumn leaves

Message edited on: 09/29/2005 02:36

leaves float in the wake of a breeze through the orchard: who rides a gold wind?

Wind caries secrets of people who dont read rules. I apologize :)

Apologize not If you haven't seen Firefly. Serenity now. ahem Well it comes out in the Autumn ;) And a last word like apologize.. that was tough too!

Now comes the gray sky chill winds wearing summers end dormant playthings cleaned

Cleaned knife slices,
Cuts deep, without forgiveness.
Jack-o-lantern smiles.

Message edited on: 09/29/2005 17:11

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.

smiles light the faces
of my parents bourboned eyes
sweets after bedtime

(halloween in Minnesota)

Message edited on: 09/29/2005 17:34

bedtime and the seeds snuggle deep within the soil frost-edged coverlet

Coverlet of leaves Begins to cover the ground. Birds are flying south.

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.

south lies the summer dreaming still in golden haze... but I face the snows.

snows along branchtips ride down with last falling leaves the squirrel scampers OK... maybe you guys didn't like the last word, so here is another. ;) Carolly

Sheesh.. scampers?? Hmmm.. Scampers, scampers, flees, The warm and soft summer breeze From the cold, north winds.

Winds of change now blow Leaves turn crimson red then fall South fly flocks of birds

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.

birds plunge arrow-sure feathers lashed to beating wing targeting the sun

Oh, I do like that one! Sun wains with autumn While evenings grow quickly chill Camp fire warms old bones

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.

Thanks! bones fall from the wall mah jongg tiles click and rustle: I meld the seasons

Season turned brown-red Winds whispers then howls: Winter is coming

Coming full glory Of vivid yellows, fire reds. Autumn!, tress proclaim.

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.

Proclaim, "Finals Coming!" Books, papers, reading, Studying, all night.

night creeps from shadows steals from under rock and root hides behind the moon

moon beckons the myst the sound of dried leaves soft fall walk in your heartbeat

Heartbeat of the Earth, The slow and rhythmic changing Of the four seasons.

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.

seasons turn away mounting loss to marching year: the last day passes

Passes quick, the sun. Days grow short and night grows chill. Autumn colors fade.

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.

Fade these silent days Summer's laughter bleached and bleak Husks rattle faintly

Oh, very good! Excellent imagery. Passes was a ..... by the way. I really struggled with that one! ;-) Now here's another to keep things going. Autumn's not over yet, folks. Keep 'em coming. Faintly colors fade, From orange and red to dirty browns. Autumn slips away.

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.

How about treating it as a plural noun? Passes fill with clouds: When the mountains betray you Who can hold back snow? Dealing with passes as transitions was perhaps harder. Of course, that's the meat of a challenge. This is like Iron Chef, but we only have one word and we have to make dinner out of it. Speaking of dinner, I'd better get something to eat before tackling this, or the next, one. ;^)

A noun! A noun! My kingdom for a noun! But of course. And I seem to be stuck in a faded colors rut. I need to think out of the box more. :-) jon

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.

Away these wild winds!
Lash branches and drive hellhounds:
We ride on this night. OK, there's a noun. :) Carolly

Message edited on: 10/31/2005 17:33

Night time falls on all the snow will hear my call, this white winter wish. (I didn't mean to rhyme)

Wish in vain for warmth,
long hot nights, and kisses,
loving on the beach.

Beach fires send sparks high To drift up among the stars. Autumn sands are cold.

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.

Cold claws shred the leaves As barren branches shiver Wind scratches windows

Windows rimed with frost As autumn wanes towards winter. Skies turn gray and cold. It will be interesting to see if we can keep this going, now that it's dropped down off page one. Still have pleanty of Autumn left to go! jon

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.

Cold enters the heart Restless branches throw off ice Sleep comes from within Well, I suppose we could link back to it if it gets buried too deeply. The trees are just barely starting to turn here. Christmass stuff is everywhere... I wish we'd take a bit more time to celebrate autumn first! Carolly

Within me I sense the start of autumn fire. The skies are clear.

Clear sapphire presses The myopic sky is an Unwinking watcher

Watcher of today, please tell me of tomorrow. Do we destroy Earth?

Earth in autumn time, Snuggling in for that long sleep. Don't annoy the bear!

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.

Bear the broad baskets of plundered fruit, leave only The frost-tipped grape-vine.

Grape-vine yeilds fine wine. Like me, mellows over time. Autumn of my years.

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.

Years of winters pass, it's cold, I wait for the snow. Then, it comes, at last.

Last leaf clings to bough, Quivers in the cold north wind. Bright colors, long gone. All right, TheAlex! Good comeback to keep it going. There's still lots of Autumn left.

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.

Gone is the green breath Sweet corn sighing and humming: Frost-stricken clatter

clatter, dry leaves, no? flurrying up to the sky replaced by snow fall? **** it's snowing here in the Rockies and it is amazingly beautiful

Congrats on the AoM jstro. 8D Strangely enough it snowed the day after I wrote that Haiku. I bet it looks amazing in the Rockies. Anyway... --- Fall, the fruits I see on cold earth, planting new seeds for another time.

Time freezes the sap In marrowed limbs, in heartwood, Slow beats full measure. Carolly And, yes, congratulations, Jon!

measure not the snow, by inches,foot,yard or mile enjoy the journey :) snowblowers....a good thing

Journey of seasons, white, green, a splash of colour. I see long shadows.

shadows touch and flee frost-edged rock and bladed grass: geese gabble above

Above, crystals form. North Wind mixes and stirs them. Autumn's first snow falls.

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.

Falls of russet leaves sharp scraps like scissored paper Dry rain rustling (and, yes, I do pronoun the middle syllable in rustling)

Rustling has stopped now that autumn's gone away. Trees lay rest for now.

Now don't be hasty, For autumn's not over yet. Ignore all that snow.

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.

(like it, jstro) Snow, what? Speak with haste, not so much to see here. It's blue sky or rain.

rain on the parade? I think not, snow? rain? or mixed please just watch the road **** my public service announcement, after a tangle with black ice last week, black and blue are NOT festival colors and bruised ribs are NO fun....be safe

Road of thin branches Whips the incautious squirrel: Nuts go scattering. ********************* And you take care, too! Black ice is dangerous even to walk over (I still have scars on my face from an encounter 20 years ago). Try not to get sick... you don't want to cough until those ribs heal. Carolly

Scattering leaves pass the window as I look out. A storm is raging.

raging and roaring clouds like albino lions snow the end result

Result of cycles Ever forming, without end. Fall fades to winter. --- Yes, be careful and be well. Best wishes for a speedy recovery. jon

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.

winter of content feathered skies, downy landscape mountains' crystal crest **** thanks y'all for the good wishes I can't impress enough how quickly and out of the blue an accident can happen on icy roads....be cautious! I am still shaking my head, a week later, can't believe I'm still here. 'There is a reason for everything'

Crest of the sparrow, proud as it pecks for fell seeds. Will it pass winter? **** I'm aware of how the roads can be after extreme weather changes too, it was the best car I ever had, but luckily it was only the car and few bricks that were written off.

Winter steals the hue From sky, from leaf, from deep pool... Where is hidden hoard?

hoard the winter sun secret it to your abode bathe in it's lustre

Lustre in puddles. Last of autumn leaves reflect, sorry skies to me. --- "Me" can't be the easiest word to start a Haiku on. :S

Me, alone in woods. Naked trees bend in the wind. Autumn's glory, gone. --- I don't know. I'd rather tackle me than luster. That one had me stumped. Good job. jon

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.

gone, in a moment
soon to be replaced by kin,
fate of the snowflake

Message edited on: 12/15/2005 21:40

Snowflake and snowfall, chiseled scrap from solid cloud, Wind's serrated edge.

Edge of the forest, I enter wicked winter. It's cold in here.

Enter into rime crystal zephyr wind blows strong falling flakes down

"One Oneness One"

Down jackets, cinched tight.
Raw red ears, and mittened hands.
They call this Autumn?

Message edited on: 12/17/2005 08:31

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.

autumn? look around snow on the mountains, ice breaths crystallize mid-air

Midwest sunlight blast Across the autumn leaves strike Perspective view autumn

"One Oneness One"

Autumn stirs its last, just echoes of the past life. It will replenish.

Replenish! Refill! Restore! Cloaked in early dark is land's recovery. Do we want to shift to winter mode... since it is after soltice... or keep this string going until the crocus pop up? :) Carolly

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Winter has started.