midrael opened this issue on Nov 13, 2005 ยท 6 posts
midrael posted Sun, 13 November 2005 at 1:43 PM
Attached Link: http://www.renderosity.com/contest.ez?contest_id=616
Hello everyone! The November Writer's Challenge has just started up! This time, it's for both prose and poetry, and the theme is "Change." As before, please feel free to post feedback on the challenge entries that you read here. Please refer by the entry number or title of the entered work. Compliments and constructive criticism only please! Also, don't forget the overall Renderosity contest, this time with actual prizes. Writers are able to enter, so let's show them what we can do!
shaienne posted Sun, 04 December 2005 at 7:25 AM
Well written; saying much more than meets the eye.
shaienne posted Sun, 04 December 2005 at 7:31 AM
I remember what this poem feels like. Excellent job!
leanndra posted Mon, 05 December 2005 at 8:06 AM
What a beautiful poem. Dramatic and deeply moving! I know how this feels! Leanndra
eryt posted Wed, 07 December 2005 at 6:06 PM
Shaienne...your writing is superb!..and i look forward to future work from you!!
Wolfspirit posted Mon, 19 December 2005 at 9:30 PM
I appreciate all the entries, #1 I understood and could relate too, on some level, yet there is morethus drew out thoughtsfelt it flowed well and came across to the sound of music. #2. Was sad and disturbed me somewhat yet, toward the end relievedthe writing was excellent in the sense that it pulls its reader into the heart of it where the reader can experience a type virtual reality as if literally watching. #3. Was short, sweet, and simple as it began with logic and ended the same way, and I like it. #4 This, one of course was mine, and it was based solely on a story I had written, as I found it difficult to pull out the right words to make it stand alone as a poem and thank you to all who read it #5. I enjoyed the visual art added, it brought atmosphere to the piece of work, also with this writing, I find it is very nice when one has nothing better to say, but I love you. #6. This writing is more than true Again this in another piece of writing that is excellenta virtual reality atmosphere! #7 this poem made me smile, sportswhat fun, short story told with excellence #8. Written excellent as well, a peaceful lesson for all told with a peaceful voice as was executed naturally and perfectly #9 this gave me the feelings of the flow of change as it shifts and shapes smoothly into acceptance. In this change occurs subtle, natural. Overall I enjoyed all the writings, and had fun participating, thank you all, and have a wonderful Holiday Season!