Forum: Bryce


Subject: WIP 2 - The Visitor

TheBryster opened this issue on Feb 15, 2006 ยท 19 posts


TheBryster posted Wed, 15 February 2006 at 6:55 AM

C&Cs welcome... Thanks for looking

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ysvry posted Wed, 15 February 2006 at 7:21 AM

im still missing the red glow on the ground , try it and you see it will make the picture more a whole, now it looks as if the spaceship is just glued ontop of a landscape pic.

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Sans2012 posted Wed, 15 February 2006 at 8:10 AM

Its a sweet model Bryster, I really like it! Its very original and unique. I think some dust coming up around the base of the ship would give a more dramatic look. And maybe some PW glow coming from the engines would be cool. Michael:)

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pidjy posted Wed, 15 February 2006 at 8:59 AM

I really like the texture work on this!!!!!


pauljs75 posted Wed, 15 February 2006 at 9:29 AM

Whoah... The look of the glowing crystalline spike thingys is really cool. Now it just needs to cast light on the ground and kick up some dust like the others have said. Probably easiest to do in post.


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Nukeboy posted Wed, 15 February 2006 at 9:44 AM

The organic nature of the ship is really cool; I agree with ysvry, that you need dust and light on the planet surface...


bandolin posted Wed, 15 February 2006 at 10:22 AM

I'd post in some distance blur to the mountains.


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pakled posted Wed, 15 February 2006 at 11:17 AM

maybe a coupla metaballs on the plane, then textured with dust or clouds, thinned out, etc..a small radial in the area, and there you go..

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sackrat posted Wed, 15 February 2006 at 11:59 AM

Looks fantastic so far ! Ugly brute though.

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BecSchm posted Wed, 15 February 2006 at 6:57 PM

Is that a mousetrap? ;)


Swade posted Wed, 15 February 2006 at 9:39 PM

Lookin' good Chris... The afore mentioned is what I would probably suggest as well. Keep on with it. 8)

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TheBryster posted Thu, 16 February 2006 at 4:32 AM

BecSchm: No! It's a washing machine........

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TheBryster posted Thu, 16 February 2006 at 4:33 AM

Next iteration....

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TheBryster posted Thu, 16 February 2006 at 4:36 AM

I've added glow to the exhaust of the main engines and illuminated the ground from the down-jets. The down jets are also reflected in the hull mat. Many thanks for all the useful C&Cs!

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BecSchm posted Thu, 16 February 2006 at 6:05 AM

Aha! - a nicely designed, well textured washing machine. But will it get the clothes clean? Really this is very nice. The greebling (is that a word?) on the sides adds a lot of interest without being overdone. The terrains are nice, too - very believable without drawing attention away from the center of interest. It does look like it could kill a few mice, though. More like obliterate them!


deadman67 posted Thu, 16 February 2006 at 3:28 PM

one thing you could add is dust being kicked up from the ground great work.


TheBryster posted Thu, 16 February 2006 at 7:48 PM

Deadman67: I'm working on it...;-)

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bikermouse posted Fri, 17 February 2006 at 2:03 AM

Bryster, You've gotten better in the last year!


TheBryster posted Fri, 17 February 2006 at 5:37 AM

BM: Thanks, but I just push the buttons!

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