Forum: Writers


Subject: Spring Haiku?

TheAlex opened this issue on Mar 14, 2006 · 202 posts


TheAlex posted Tue, 14 March 2006 at 3:35 PM

The same rules as before, a 5-7-5 syllable count including something to do with Spring and the following Haiku starting on the last word of the previous one. Did anyone archive the previous threads? I didn't with the Winter one and all the posts seem to have disappeared... :| Suppose I have to start then! --- The seeds March upwards towards the sunny Spring skies. New life will blossom. ---


midrael posted Tue, 14 March 2006 at 3:42 PM

Wow, that haiku was even a real haiku with all the mentions of the season! ;) Good idea! Nothing better than a spring haiku! Let's see... Please listen clearly For the ides are approaching Beware betrayal!


TheAlex posted Tue, 14 March 2006 at 3:50 PM

Just incase you don't receive your IM (I hardly ever notice them), your Haiku should have started with the word 'blossom'. Re-read my post and it should make sense, I aren't the greatest at explaining things...


midrael posted Tue, 14 March 2006 at 4:08 PM

Oh woops.. LOL I was the one that started the previous haiku challenge too. I should have known better. Ahem.. let me try that again! Blossom now springing From what once seemed dead and lost Renew the season


Wolfspirit posted Wed, 15 March 2006 at 12:27 AM

New to this, but I'll try, so here is a few. Blossom family fun Creativity pastel In dance drew springtime Blossom of spring comes Defeat the thorns of winter Light perfume so sweet


AeonTSB posted Wed, 15 March 2006 at 1:20 AM

sweet warmth of spring time tingles my senses gently surrounded by green


midrael posted Wed, 15 March 2006 at 3:54 PM

Green grass, warm spring breeze Blowing through the renewed blades A setting serene.


dialyn posted Wed, 15 March 2006 at 5:24 PM

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I remember it well since I didn't read the instructions and messed up my contribution.

dialyn posted Wed, 15 March 2006 at 5:28 PM

Serene air fliers Glide between dewy grass blades Dandelion seeds.


Margana posted Tue, 28 March 2006 at 3:16 AM

Hi.I'm new here,but I'd like to play,if I may... Seeds of what's to come Remnants of a season past Old and new as one. Fun game. -Marlene :^)

Marlene <")

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"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


dialyn posted Tue, 28 March 2006 at 8:16 AM

We love having new people come on board. :) Welcome and join in anytime.


Margana posted Tue, 28 March 2006 at 9:49 AM

Thank you.Then I shall. :^) Perhaps you can answer a question for me?I have a short poem I've written,and I would welcome opinions/suggestions regarding it.Is that done here,in this forum?If so,does one post it as a new thread? I apologise for bringing up something OT here,but I didn't think my question worthy of starting a whole thread about it... Thank you again,for welcoming me and for your time. Marlene :^)

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TheAlex posted Tue, 28 March 2006 at 10:28 AM

One small step for trees, One giant leap for sparrows. Well, their young at least. --- Hello Marlene, some people do post their writing in this forum. You could also try the Writing Gallery and ask for feedback there.


Margana posted Tue, 28 March 2006 at 10:45 AM

Thanks TheAlex.I would think the writer's gallery was more for finished pieces...so it helps to know that there are those who also post WIPs. Least?Hmmm.... Least of all the bee Awakes and shakes the slumber From his frozen wings.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


netsia posted Wed, 29 March 2006 at 12:19 PM

wings stretching anew savoring warmth of the air soon spring into flight


SndCastie posted Wed, 29 March 2006 at 1:51 PM

flight of the sparrows
is heard in the trees
waking me to the morn Hope I did this right lol

Message edited on: 03/29/2006 13:51


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven


Margana posted Wed, 29 March 2006 at 2:45 PM

Lovely lines,SndCastie...and I'm hardly the one to correct you...but they're supposed to be 5-7-5. :^(

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


SndCastie posted Wed, 29 March 2006 at 2:56 PM

LOL sorry first time


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven


SndCastie posted Wed, 29 March 2006 at 2:57 PM

Flight of the sparrows wings are heard in the trees this day waking me to the morn hows that


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven


Margana posted Wed, 29 March 2006 at 3:18 PM

Another beautiful one... You're almost there.This one is 6-7-6 :^(

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


SndCastie posted Wed, 29 March 2006 at 3:21 PM

Is that words in line because first one is five words second one is 7 words third one is 5 words.


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven


SndCastie posted Wed, 29 March 2006 at 3:22 PM

If not I don't get it sorry all the others don't have 5-7-5


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven


Margana posted Wed, 29 March 2006 at 3:32 PM

Oh okay...It's the syllables...you have to count the 'beats' in the line.It's not the number of words. I'm sure you can do it,the lines you submitted so far are lovely... :^)

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


SndCastie posted Wed, 29 March 2006 at 3:37 PM

LOL well I am not good a syllables


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven


SndCastie posted Wed, 29 March 2006 at 3:40 PM

OK how's this flight of the sparrows is heard in the trees above wake me in the morn


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven


Margana posted Wed, 29 March 2006 at 4:23 PM

Ding!Ding!Ding!You got it!Very nice,too! :^) Morn...when golden rays Kiss awake the sleeping earth How warm her sweet embrace!

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


SndCastie posted Wed, 29 March 2006 at 4:34 PM

Embrace the spring scent
for flowers are in the air
this is a special time

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Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven


netsia posted Wed, 29 March 2006 at 10:26 PM

time, essential thief, sapping life at colder clime replenish in Spring :)


Margana posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 3:01 AM

Spring of my childhood When I was green as the field And basked in the sun.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


SndCastie posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 5:47 AM

Sun glistens longer longer and longer because spring is here to stay


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven


Margana posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 8:07 AM

Stay oh sweet sweet spring! Fill me with your warmth,your hope Make me new again.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


SndCastie posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 8:10 AM

again the ground anews the buds in fragrent blossoms the smell fills the air


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven


Margana posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 8:34 AM

Air sweeps past the bloom Carrying her soft perfume Like wine for the soul.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


Margana posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 8:35 AM

Not sure I like that one,lol. :^/

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


SndCastie posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 8:55 AM

soul soothing perfume on the wind it is hanging like a long sweet breath


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven


Margana posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 9:24 AM

Breath of sweet softness Kisses on a gentle breeze Whispering of love.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 9:44 AM

love calls you softly entering on soft breezes beckoning forward

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


SndCastie posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 10:02 AM

forward on to all summer is but a step more so enjoy the way


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven


Margana posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 10:44 AM

Way into my soul The soft caress of sunshine Stirs the sleeping heart.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 10:47 AM

heart of the dawn sky burst forth with your warming light spring season is here

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 11:02 AM

Here is the moment To drink in all it's glory Let it fill your soul.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


SndCastie posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 12:24 PM

Soul of Mother Earth does blossom with much ado so take a moment


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven


TwoPynts posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 12:28 PM

moment to reflect the new earth stirs underfoot seedlings reach skyward

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


SndCastie posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 12:36 PM

Skywards do they grow
the flowers that come and go
lingering scents hang

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Message edited on: 03/30/2006 12:37


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven


Margana posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 1:04 PM

Hang up all your cares Tomorrow will be diff'rent The promise of spring.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 2:00 PM

Spring enters softly A ray of light in darkness Promise of new life.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 3:01 PM

Life...the gift she brings Like the eyes of a newborn Dear and sweet and pure.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 3:26 PM

Pure green - verdant field Float gently in grasses deep Seed upon the wind. ------ This is way too much fun. 8']

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


SndCastie posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 3:49 PM

wind russeling in trees
brings thoughts of gentle breezes
lets go among the grass Yea but my spelling could use some help LOL

Message edited on: 03/30/2006 15:49


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven


Margana posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 3:55 PM

Wind touching my skin
With soft unseen caresses
So gentle,so sweet.

Actually I like this as the last line...

And plays with my hair.

But it seemed less spring-like,lol.And 'hair' would certainly be a strange beginning word for the next one! ;^)

Message edited on: 03/30/2006 15:58

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


SndCastie posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 4:07 PM

LOL cross posted we'll go with yours :O)


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven


Margana posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 4:09 PM

LMAO!Again!Nope. Yours came first!You win,lol. ;^)

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


Margana posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 4:17 PM

Grass against my cheek I breathe in the sweet green scent And I am reborn.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


SndCastie posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 5:06 PM

LOL yea I have always had trouble spelling


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven


SndCastie posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 5:08 PM

Reborn flowers grow Again their beauty they show So take a picture


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven


Margana posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 5:50 PM

Picture perfect day
Filled with warm,golden sunshine
Bathing you in light. LOL.Like all good things,this must eventually end somewhere,I should think!Since I am new here,I have no idea when that is. Do you know? PS I have so loved this!Maybe it should 'end' with the word,'end'. Just a suggestion...and believe me,I would be just as happy to continue.

Message edited on: 03/30/2006 17:55

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


SndCastie posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 6:07 PM

LOL This is my first time so not sure how they work it


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven


Margana posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 6:37 PM

Me too,lol. Guess we could ask the moderator,or the one who started this thread,(TheAlex).Evidently there was a winter one,but it wasn't archived,so we can't see how long that one went...but that would give us a good idea. :^) I'll attempt a search...

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


SndCastie posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 6:40 PM

Ok thanks


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven


Margana posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 6:47 PM

Okay.LOL!The last one went to 85 so I guess we're 'cool'! ;^)

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


SndCastie posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 9:06 PM

Light of the morning glistens on the blooming buds Opening them full


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven


Margana posted Thu, 30 March 2006 at 9:52 PM

Full of such splendor? Then fill me and I shall sing Like never before. :^)

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts posted Fri, 31 March 2006 at 9:22 AM

Before dawn we rise Pushing up from soil and stone Fragile tendrils sprout.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


netsia posted Fri, 31 March 2006 at 10:25 AM

sprout in all glory search for warm rays of the sun bud with sweet fragrance


TwoPynts posted Fri, 31 March 2006 at 11:01 AM

Fragrance of new life The blooms begin to open Worshipping hot sun.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana posted Fri, 31 March 2006 at 12:48 PM

Sun of my childhood Endless days without a care And joy everywhere.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


SndCastie posted Fri, 31 March 2006 at 12:58 PM

Everywhere blooming
beautiful colorful buds
coming more each day

Message edited on: 03/31/2006 12:59


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven


TwoPynts posted Fri, 31 March 2006 at 1:21 PM

Day becomes cool night A refreshing time to grow Mild rainstorms pass.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana posted Fri, 31 March 2006 at 4:34 PM

Pass the time slowly Savouring the sweet bouquets Carried on the wind.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


jstro posted Sat, 01 April 2006 at 11:05 PM

Wind carries earth scent; New soil, so freshly turned. Plow cuts deep. Birds feast. Works if you give soil two syllables. A little poetic license.

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.


SndCastie posted Sat, 01 April 2006 at 11:31 PM

Feast on the hue of beautiful colors new the coming of dawn


Sandy
An imagination can create wonderful things

SndCastie's Little Haven


TwoPynts posted Mon, 03 April 2006 at 4:23 PM

Dawn breaks over hills All is wet with dew and mist Time to awaken.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana posted Fri, 07 April 2006 at 2:56 PM

Awaken and see All the new life around you Green and full of youth. ________________________________________________________ "Is there another word for thesaurus?"

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts posted Wed, 12 April 2006 at 9:39 AM

Youth blooms underfoot
Beryl grass and vivid bud
Terra firma's joy. :m_grin:

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana posted Wed, 12 April 2006 at 1:32 PM

Joy in it's splendor
Sunshine and celadon skies
And soft  scents of Spring.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts posted Wed, 12 April 2006 at 2:28 PM

Spring bling flower jems
Golden blooms adorn the hills
Bees in their rapture.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


netsia posted Wed, 12 April 2006 at 10:32 PM

rapture in lyric

jonquils harmonize yellow

sun completes the tune 


Margana posted Wed, 12 April 2006 at 11:25 PM

Tune in...there's music
In the whisper of the leaves
The song of silence.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts posted Thu, 13 April 2006 at 8:34 AM

Silence everywhere
Nothing stirs in shrouded mists
Dawn is approaching.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana posted Thu, 13 April 2006 at 11:56 AM

Approaching  sunset
Painted by  the setting sun
The world is aglow.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts posted Thu, 13 April 2006 at 12:00 PM

Aglow from within
Fanning the spark of new life
Rekindled embers.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana posted Thu, 13 April 2006 at 12:42 PM

Embers of mem'ries
Softly stirring...restoring
Coloring the day.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts posted Thu, 13 April 2006 at 12:50 PM

Day growing longer
Snow melts and grasses turn green
The end of winter.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana posted Thu, 13 April 2006 at 4:27 PM

Winter...time of sleep
Awakens to find the world
Stretching t'ward the sun.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts posted Fri, 14 April 2006 at 11:47 AM

Sun growing warmer
Golden rays caress the Earth
Rekindles life's song.


Thought for the day on how our perceptions color our world:
"Once upon a time a man whose ax was missing suspected his neighbor's son.The boy walked like a thief, looked like a thief, and spoke like a thief. But the man found his ax while digging in the valley, and the next time he saw his neighbor's son, the boy walked, looked and spoke like any other child."
-Lao-tzu, philosopher (6th century BCE)

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana posted Fri, 14 April 2006 at 1:46 PM

Song of the sparrows
Babbling brooks and buzzing bees
Spring's sweet symphony.
 

Wise words,Kortalouche-san. :^)

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts posted Mon, 17 April 2006 at 1:51 PM

Symphony tuning Nature's instruments abound Begin the chorus.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


jstro posted Mon, 17 April 2006 at 5:13 PM

Chorus of labor.
Scritch-scritch scratch of hoe and rake.
Time for the garden.

jon

 
~jon
My Blog - Mad Utopia Writing in a new era.


Margana posted Tue, 18 April 2006 at 6:25 AM

Garden...sweet haven
Serenity in the tending
Stillness for the soul.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts posted Tue, 18 April 2006 at 8:28 AM

Soul of the landscape Myriad lifeforms renewed Season of rebirth.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana posted Tue, 18 April 2006 at 11:20 AM

Rebirth...when the earth
Ready and warm and waiting
Embraces the seed.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts posted Tue, 18 April 2006 at 11:38 AM

Seed bud pome grain Embryonic spark of life Conception kernel.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana posted Tue, 18 April 2006 at 11:48 AM

Kernel,germ of life
Moistened and nurtured by earth
Finds strength in her arms.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts posted Tue, 18 April 2006 at 12:13 PM

Arms closely entwined Holding life close to her breast Too soon it runs free...

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana posted Tue, 18 April 2006 at 1:45 PM

Free as the sweet breeze
Touching each leaf and flower
Caressing the trees.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


SusiQ posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 3:59 AM

Trees swaying softly
Brimming green buds bursting through
Baby birds chirping

Copyright S.R. Hulley
Chin up, stay strong! Hugs!


TwoPynts posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 8:18 AM

Chirping frogs spawning Tadpoles mass along the shore Squirming, churning sparks.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 8:27 AM

Sparks the hollow soul
Igniting dormant mem'ries
The spring of my youth.

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


SusiQ posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 8:53 AM

Youth is made for spring
Boundless joyful energy
Leaping lambs so white

Copyright S.R. Hulley
Chin up, stay strong! Hugs!


SusiQ posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 8:55 AM

Youth is made for spring
Boundless joyful energy
Leaping lambs so white

Copyright S.R. Hulley
Chin up, stay strong! Hugs!


SusiQ posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 8:56 AM

Youth is made for spring
Boundless joyful energy
Leaping lambs so white

Copyright S.R. Hulley
Chin up, stay strong! Hugs!


SusiQ posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 9:00 AM

Copyright S.R. Hulley
Chin up, stay strong! Hugs!


SusiQ posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 9:04 AM

Youth is made for spring
Boundless joyful energy
Leaping lambs so white

Copyright S.R. Hulley
Chin up, stay strong! Hugs!


TwoPynts posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 9:09 AM

Youth is wasted Frittered away lazily Spring's a short season.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


TwoPynts posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 9:37 AM

Oops, looks like we really were posting here and cross posted in the process, lol. I guess we need to practice patience when the Forum has one of it's little hiccups.

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 10:09 AM

 I guess we should use Susi's...since hers came in first.

Do you want to have a go at it,Kortalouche?

Marlene <")

Marlene S. Piskin Photography
My Blog


"A new study shows that licking the sweat off a frog can cure depression. The down side is, the minute you stop licking, the frog gets depressed again." - Jay Leno


TwoPynts posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 10:28 AM

Nope, you go ahead...I used my turn already. 'White' sounds more fun than 'season' anyway. :o]

Kort Kramer - Kramer Kreations


Margana posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 10:39 AM

Okie dokey :^)

White gypsophelia
Tiny little clouds of bloom
Soft as baby's breath.

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TwoPynts posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 4:16 PM

Breath now quickening Heartbeat of Gaia grows strong Pulse of life renewed.

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L8RDAZE posted Wed, 19 April 2006 at 6:46 PM

Renewed energies
Radiate the land... bring life
Nature is reborn






SusiQ posted Thu, 20 April 2006 at 12:54 AM

Sorry about the mess up above. The PC kept freezing and it looked as if the posting hadn't uploaded. Hugs and apologies. Is there any way to remove the extra postings?

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Chin up, stay strong! Hugs!


SusiQ posted Thu, 20 April 2006 at 12:56 AM

Reborn into life
New season that is crisp green
Growing tender buds

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TwoPynts posted Thu, 20 April 2006 at 12:10 PM

Buds along the branch Spiral outward into life Open for the sun.

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Margana posted Thu, 20 April 2006 at 5:31 PM

SusiQ---No worries.As far as deleting,15  minutes after posting,you can no longer delete.Sorry to say.:^/

Sun blankets the land
In soft hues of pink and gold
Her sweet kiss 'good night'.

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netsia posted Mon, 24 April 2006 at 11:44 AM

night, when the darkness

conceals the frenzy of Spring

new buds apoppin'


Margana posted Mon, 24 April 2006 at 12:10 PM

Apoppin' with life
Youthful energy and joy
In each bud and bloom.

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Margana posted Thu, 27 April 2006 at 2:37 AM

Bloom and bud alike
Stretch achingly to the sun
The pain that is growth.

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TwoPynts posted Thu, 27 April 2006 at 10:10 AM

Growth starts slowly now Gaining momentum swiftly Seed to bloom so fast. ----- not my best effort...but what I could come up with for now... I hate to see you Haikuing to yourself. ;oP

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Margana posted Thu, 27 April 2006 at 1:48 PM

LOL,taking pity on me,eh?Do I look pathetic???? ;^)

Okay,hmmm....

Fast the years go by
Savor the sweetness of Spring
She is quick to pass.

(Not my best,either,lol...)


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TwoPynts posted Thu, 27 April 2006 at 2:43 PM

Pass gas sassafrass This thread's a pain in the ass Summer please hurry. just kidding around... :lol: :laugh: :rolleyes: :tt2: :woot: :m_laugh: :m_bouncy: :m_blush: :m_coolsmirk: :m_tongue2: :m_wave: -----

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Margana posted Thu, 27 April 2006 at 2:55 PM

ROTFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What would RR do without you?You crack me up.:lol:

Hurry!Oh!What to do!
Never meant to 'bother' you!

Was this fast enough?
:tongue2:

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TwoPynts posted Thu, 27 April 2006 at 3:31 PM

Enough rain and dirt Fat mud pies for you and you Time to wash the floors.

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Margana posted Thu, 27 April 2006 at 4:13 PM

Ummmmm  methinks there was quite a different haiku here before I went out.  LOL ;^P

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Margana posted Thu, 27 April 2006 at 5:23 PM

Floors of hard-packed earth
Give  way to carpets of green
Heaven underfoot.

Sigh...'Floors' was a tough one...

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jstro posted Thu, 27 April 2006 at 9:09 PM

Underfoot, lichen.
Tiny miracles of life.
Go light of foot here.

 

jon

 

 
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TwoPynts posted Fri, 28 April 2006 at 8:44 AM

Here, there, everywhere Shoots of green burst from the earth "DON'T WALK ON THE GRASS!" ----Okay, I guess that is getting a bit silly...

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Margana posted Fri, 28 April 2006 at 11:10 AM

Grass and  garden hose
So simple and yet young ones
Giggle with delight.

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TwoPynts posted Fri, 28 April 2006 at 12:44 PM

Delight with the sight. A tree growing wide and tall. Yep. Size does matter.

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Margana posted Fri, 28 April 2006 at 12:57 PM

Matter...there's a word
That could kill this thread for sure ;^)
So I'll ignore it.

LOL.


i want to be just like e.e.cummings.

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Drekinn posted Fri, 28 April 2006 at 4:05 PM

Matter, organic.
It embodies our planet.
Come Spring, it renews.


Hi all, saw a challenge here and thought I'd contribute. This is fun. :)

Drekinn.

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Margana posted Fri, 28 April 2006 at 5:20 PM

Glad you did!Hope you continue to play along!


Today's subliminal thought:

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Drekinn posted Fri, 28 April 2006 at 5:39 PM

It seems I was wrong.
How cleverly contrived,
Your former reply.


Sorry, Margana. I've just now realised that your previous post was in fact a witty remark in haiku-style. :p  Very well executed too. :)

Drekinn

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Margana posted Fri, 28 April 2006 at 6:13 PM

Reply freely friend!
It should be about the spring
So we'll use 'renews'. ;^)


No problem,Drekinn.I was stumped...and we haven't had that many 'players'...

Yours is wonderful.I hope I can come up with something for 'renews' now,lol!


Everybody should believe something
I believe I'll have more coffee.

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jstro posted Fri, 28 April 2006 at 8:45 PM

Renews hope in heart,
These crisp blue skies and cool nights,
New warbler, on wing.

 
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TwoPynts posted Mon, 01 May 2006 at 9:21 AM

Wing, sing, balancing An owls hoot marks its silent flight Finding food for young. --------------- Hey, nice...some more people have joined in again!

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Margana posted Mon, 01 May 2006 at 10:53 AM

Young and old alike
Find glory in the moment
Hope is on the wind.


"Tut, tut, child! Everything's got a moral, if only you can find it."-The Duchess ( Alice in Wonderland )

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willothewhisp posted Mon, 01 May 2006 at 9:17 PM

Wind blows soft then strong,

Rain falling , April showers

Warm sun, summer soon


Margana posted Tue, 02 May 2006 at 2:43 AM

Soon I will be gone
Like the Spring my days are few
And too quickly passed.

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willothewhisp posted Tue, 02 May 2006 at 6:29 AM

passed over, left behind

spring burgeons into summer

new joys, no regrets


Margana posted Tue, 02 May 2006 at 8:24 AM

Regrets...I've but one
Not standing still long enough
Before spring was done.

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TwoPynts posted Tue, 02 May 2006 at 9:25 AM

Done with cold winter Icy fingers loose their hold Energized rebirth!

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SusiQ posted Wed, 03 May 2006 at 5:32 AM

Rebirth and reborn
This life of mine soars upwards
As the eagle high.

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TwoPynts posted Wed, 03 May 2006 at 10:49 AM

High climbs the sky vine Towards sun it streches up Leafy abundance.

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Margana posted Wed, 03 May 2006 at 1:54 PM

Abundance of green
And yellow dandelions
Like so many suns.

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TwoPynts posted Wed, 03 May 2006 at 2:50 PM

Sons and daughters, rise Gaia beckons you too her Join the eternal ---- Took liberties with "suns" ;o]

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Margana posted Wed, 03 May 2006 at 3:05 PM

Eternal lovers
Sun and moon chase eachother
Across the heavens.


Okay I took liberties, too.It's not exactly about Spring...But it's what popped into my head.

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TwoPynts posted Wed, 03 May 2006 at 3:11 PM

Heavens to Betsy! Maw, it's time to plant the corn. Where's mah overalls? ---------- (if "overalls" isn't a thread killer, I don't know what is!)

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Margana posted Thu, 04 May 2006 at 12:06 AM

ROTFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay will take liberties once again,lol...

Overall not bad
The chance to renew yourself
And forget the past.


If someone wants to grab 'overalls' please be my guest!

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TwoPynts posted Thu, 04 May 2006 at 8:31 AM

Past becomes present Day rolls into evening Put the kids to bed. ------ Nice recovery! :m_thumbu:

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willothewhisp posted Thu, 04 May 2006 at 4:03 PM

Bed is for deaming

Recharging, for tomorrow

Is another day


Margana posted Thu, 04 May 2006 at 6:20 PM

Day of sweet pleasures
Spent in grateful solitude
Among the heather.

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SusiQ posted Fri, 05 May 2006 at 5:45 AM

Heather new and fresh
Fills the air with scented spring
Purple tufts grow wild.

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willothewhisp posted Fri, 05 May 2006 at 7:54 AM

wild  flowers growing

in open meadows, poppy

red, cornflower blue 


TwoPynts posted Fri, 05 May 2006 at 8:43 AM

Day becomes cool night Crickets chirp their gleeful tune The world settles in.

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Margana posted Fri, 05 May 2006 at 1:23 PM

Ummmmm Kortalouche................................

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TwoPynts posted Fri, 05 May 2006 at 1:47 PM

Ooops..., my bad. Dang ebot take me to what I thought was the last entry...heheh. Blue no longer, aye The change in weather uplifts Spring makes one happy.

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Margana posted Sat, 06 May 2006 at 3:01 AM

Happy?But oh no!
I just learned you are leaving
Will this thread survive?


LOL I'm kidding.If anyone wants to use 'happy' as a starting point,please feel free to disregard this!


"A synonym is a word you use when you can't spell the word you first thought of."
---Burt Bacharach

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Drekinn posted Sat, 06 May 2006 at 4:22 PM

Survive winter's grasp,
Its icy fingers melted,
Hearts grow warm with life.

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jstro posted Sat, 06 May 2006 at 6:46 PM

Life, gentle on breeze,
The bird's call, a butterfly,
Pollen, and a sneeze.

~jon

 
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Drekinn posted Sun, 07 May 2006 at 12:57 AM

Sneeze often, no more,
Cast away that handkerchief,
And breathe a new day.

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willothewhisp posted Sun, 07 May 2006 at 4:49 AM

day follows night just

as summer follows spring with

heightened warmth and light


Drekinn posted Sun, 07 May 2006 at 6:25 AM

Light twinkles through leaves,
Birds tweet playfully in trees,
Hives humming with bees.


Now that's just gay.

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willothewhisp posted Sun, 07 May 2006 at 6:35 AM

I do hope you aren't using "gay" as a perjoritive? .... aaargh! Too much time spent surrounded by teenage chavs!

 

bees blunder buzzing

from delicate bloom to bloom

making beauty ours


SusiQ posted Mon, 08 May 2006 at 2:26 AM

Ours to live, sweet time
Is but a fleeting glimmer
Like the spring season.

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Margana posted Mon, 08 May 2006 at 7:38 AM

Season of delight
Birds on wing sing songs of cheer
Symphony in flight.

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SusiQ posted Mon, 08 May 2006 at 7:41 AM

Flight to high freedom
Both for birds and plants alike
Growing up in Spring

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Margana posted Mon, 08 May 2006 at 8:02 AM

Spring... awash with rain
Scented air of  soft lilac
A lavender breeze.

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SusiQ posted Mon, 08 May 2006 at 8:22 AM

Breeze, oh gentle breeze
Carrier of warmth of spring
Blow the cold away

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Margana posted Mon, 08 May 2006 at 8:27 AM

Away winter freeze!
Show no more your icy gray
Time now for color.

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SusiQ posted Mon, 08 May 2006 at 8:55 AM

ha ha ha you and me girl!!!


Color filters through
Bloom by bloom now bursting forth
Brings the world to life


I'm gone for the day... Bye bye

 

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Margana posted Mon, 08 May 2006 at 10:23 AM

Life affirming life
His love renews my spirit
Like the breath of spring.


LOL.Have a great day!

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willothewhisp posted Mon, 08 May 2006 at 3:03 PM

spring is sprung, the grass

is rizz, I wonder where the

birdies is. Some say ...

 


OK, I'm sorry, I just couldn't resist 😊


Margana posted Mon, 08 May 2006 at 4:18 PM

LOL!

Say hello to dawn
Sunkissed morns of pink and gold
And moistened with dew.

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jstro posted Mon, 08 May 2006 at 6:20 PM

Dew glitters on grass,
Tiny sunlit gems of dawn,
Glitter of the gods.

~jon

 
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Drekinn posted Mon, 08 May 2006 at 9:24 PM

Gods revive the lands,
The pulse of nature returns,
With warmth and a smile.

--

If anyone here is interested I've just started a new alliteration challenge thread in the main forum so be sure to check it out. :)

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Margana posted Tue, 09 May 2006 at 12:13 AM

Smile...for it is time
Time to know and feel and breathe
Do not lose today.


Okay.Not exactly 'spring' related...but kind of...

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SusiQ posted Tue, 09 May 2006 at 1:10 AM

Today the spring rain
Saturates the soil to bring
Life to the dry seeds


Smiling, feeling and breathing are also part of spring 😉

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Drekinn posted Wed, 10 May 2006 at 12:06 AM

Seeds that lay dormant,
Send forth their probing fingers,
In search of the sun.

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Margana posted Wed, 10 May 2006 at 12:40 AM

Sun stirs sleepy soil
Sending soft whispers to wake
Urging with her warmth.

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Drekinn posted Wed, 10 May 2006 at 1:30 AM

Warmth opens its eyes,
Spreading its arms with a yawn,
It's time to get up.

--

Beautiful imagery Marlene!

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Margana posted Wed, 10 May 2006 at 10:05 AM

Up over the hill
He waits for me in flowers
Springtime with my love.


Thank you,yours,too.
I haven't had time to check your thread yet,sorry.
I will though.  :^)

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Drekinn posted Wed, 10 May 2006 at 10:46 PM

Love is in the air,
A gift from Mother Nature,
For us all to share.

 

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Margana posted Wed, 10 May 2006 at 10:50 PM

Share in the splendor
Spring is a fountain from which
Anyone can drink.

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SusiQ posted Thu, 11 May 2006 at 1:00 AM

Drink in Spring's joy, hope
New life and new beginnings
Possibilities.

 


Morning all!

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Margana posted Thu, 11 May 2006 at 11:18 AM

Possibilities
Opportunity beckons
With the break of day.


Good afternoon! ;^)

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TwoPynts posted Thu, 11 May 2006 at 12:02 PM

Day calls dreamily Subtle shift from darkest night Dawn graces the land.

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Margana posted Thu, 11 May 2006 at 12:23 PM

WB Kortalouche!

Land of my fathers
Misty forests ,ancient pines
And heath on the moor.

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TwoPynts posted Thu, 11 May 2006 at 1:08 PM

Thanks Marlenalouche! Lots to catch up on... ----------- Moor fast the vessel Storms darken yon horizon Frothing foamy seas.

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Margana posted Thu, 11 May 2006 at 1:18 PM

Seas surging swelling
Crashing onto sandy shores
Washing sunburned stone.


I can imagine!

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TwoPynts posted Thu, 11 May 2006 at 1:30 PM

Stone cannot hold fast A tiny crack spreads slowly Eager roots push through.

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Margana posted Thu, 11 May 2006 at 8:32 PM

Ooh I like that one,Kortalouche.

Through soaking spring rains
And warm sun-drenched afternoons
Tiny buds grow strong.

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TwoPynts posted Fri, 12 May 2006 at 11:35 AM

Strong gusts tousle new leaves Horizon darkens blackly Spring storm approaches. __________ I like yours too Marlene! =]

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Margana posted Fri, 12 May 2006 at 12:15 PM

Hi Kortalouche.

I hate saying this,because it's such a lovely 'image'...but your first line has 6 syllables.  :sad:

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Drekinn posted Sun, 14 May 2006 at 6:22 AM

Approaches the warmth,
Like a blanket set ablaze,
And covers the land.

 

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Margana posted Sun, 14 May 2006 at 9:45 AM

Land adorned like jewels,
Diamond raindrops stirred by breeze,
The twinkling of leaves.


Lovely one,Drekinn. :^)

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Drekinn posted Mon, 15 May 2006 at 7:25 PM

Leaves suckle their thumbs,
Wriggling in playful delight,
A new world beckons.

--

Thanks Marlene, and gorgeous imagery yourself. :) Thanks also for the encouraging comments on my poetry. :)

 

Drekinn
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TwoPynts posted Tue, 16 May 2006 at 9:48 AM

Beckons day's dawning Lifting golden head slowly Sunflower awakes.

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dialyn posted Tue, 16 May 2006 at 12:04 PM

Summer haiku challenge has been posted here: http://market.renderosity.com/mod/forumpro/showthread.php?thread_id=2648217


TwoPynts posted Tue, 16 May 2006 at 12:28 PM

Aww, so Spring is over? ;]

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Margana posted Tue, 16 May 2006 at 1:28 PM

Hint hint,lol.

Moooooooooving along now. 😉


Eschew obfuscation.

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Drekinn posted Wed, 17 May 2006 at 6:35 AM

Farewell sweet season,
Prepared is nature's mixture,
Now it's time to bake.

--

Even though I sit here peering out into a cold drizzle, I'm ready to turn up the heat. 😉

Drekinn
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TwoPynts posted Wed, 17 May 2006 at 1:58 PM

Spring has sprung again And again, again, again. It will spring no more...

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