Hi. I'm trying to create a comic based in poser figures. There are some billion problems... but wich I want to focus right now is the language. English is not my mother language, so I'm not able to write a convincin' text. Would any of you help me? This is one image and the text... << My name is Rachel Dubrois, from New Orleans. 28 Yrs old, I work as a journalist in a small weekly magazine. It's my first job after finishing University. I usually write some words about social events or local news. Nothing interesting. But with the death of a young marine from Luisiana in Irak, all the 'good' journalists where occupied, so the ' haunted mansion' article was assigned to me... Mr. Vermont in person rang me to tell me the news. >>