duskrider opened this issue on May 10, 2006 · 6 posts
duskrider posted Wed, 10 May 2006 at 8:43 AM
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Hello everyone.I've been working on a picture for a friend of mine, and would like some opinions on it. At this stage, it's pretty much finished, but I'm a little nervous about presenting it to him. I just want to make sure I've done it to the best of my abilities. I'm pretty new to Bryce and 3d art, so I really don't know what's good and what's not yet. lol
If you could just... I dunno, take a look and tell me what you think. I put it up in the gallery, but pictures move pretty fast through there and I would really like some thoughts on it. The story behind the picture is in the gallery at the link I've provided.
Thanks in advance, Link is attached.
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erosiaart posted Wed, 10 May 2006 at 9:04 AM
I love the thought, the meaning behind it. my only suggestion? reduce the tree trunk..make it thinner..me mean..and make the tree a rounded one..rather than a tall one. tall is rather overbearing, powerful. rounded - shading, protection ,shelter.
lovely work, esp for a beginner.
what happened is tragic, and yes tough. but everything happens with a greater meaning behind it. my empathy for your friend and his wife.
Mugsey posted Wed, 10 May 2006 at 1:39 PM
This is a beautiful image - the best I've yet seen - I wouldn't change a thing - because you've made your point, the image has served it's purpose,and there's no more that you could say that wouldn't speak to what's already been said by this image. It's a perfect completed work, let it stand...
duskrider posted Thu, 11 May 2006 at 4:17 AM
Thanks for the responses guys. I really appreciate it.
erosiaart - I actually thought about doing just that with the tree, but decided I'd rather have something that imparts strength and control - more like a guardian. Those were my thoughts anyway, though I can see both points.
And thank you both for the opinions and kind words. I honestly feel better... more confident, that my friend will like the render.
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and he's warm for the rest of his life.
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Dann-O posted Thu, 11 May 2006 at 5:56 AM
Nice image. I would desaturate it a tad. Some colors are a bit too saturated. It is very good and remember it is your picture so make it how you want to make it.
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Stoner posted Thu, 11 May 2006 at 6:20 AM
I think it makes the right impression. It´s possible you could smooth the grass and flowers a bit, but I´m not sure that´s really necessary. Excellent work so far.
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