Forum: Bryce


Subject: High places WIP

RobertJ opened this issue on May 22, 2006 ยท 3 posts


RobertJ posted Mon, 22 May 2006 at 3:56 PM

Need to work on it, still walking a tightrope would be more ... scary i guess :)

Perhaps a bit closer to the camera as well.

Robert van der Veeke Basugasubasubasu Basugasubakuhaku Gasubakuhakuhaku!! "Better is the enemy of good enough." Dr. Mikoyan of the Mikoyan Gurevich Design Bureau.


diolma posted Mon, 22 May 2006 at 5:21 PM

I like it!!!

Suggestion (there's always one of those)..

I honestly didn't notice the little figure clinging tight there until I looked again. My eye saw the balcony rail, zoomed along it, shot off the end, saw the far buildings., wandered back along the road...

Maybe change the helmet to a bright red??? (IE, Draw attention to it). Or other textures on the poor little chap/chapess. Although I expect you already have that in mind as an enhav=ncement..

Just a thought...

Camera angle seems to me to be just fine (as is POV etc.) Just needs that little figure to be a little more "obvious". IMVHO...

Cheers,
Diolma



gammaRascal posted Sat, 27 May 2006 at 6:04 PM

i like it.

have you tried putting the little dude a bit off his butt and more hanging from the backs of his knees? or if he's gona stay on his butt, maybe you should bring the lowers legs backwards to center with his torso and throw the shoulder back a bit. it doesn't seem balanced properly.