Ok, this is the first pre-pre-pre-pre-production draft of my scene.

It is my SECOND render at all so feel free to kick me as you wish. I already have noted some things:

1. I'll change the pose, moving Kei's legs behind the body. It seems more natural and I'll hide the poke-throughs of the suit.

2. The shadows are horrible. I have two lights now: one "sun" outside the right window and a fill light in front but it should not cast shadows. I am SO ignorant about lights!

3. There is no background: I need to find a suitable picture.

4. The wall behind Kei is too naked. I must add some color (maybe a wall paper texture and a poster)

What else? This draft is at "preview" quality because moving the cursor towards the "final" setting is a nightmare in terms of rendering time...

Giorgio