Have a look at the image, and tell me: left or right?

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Ignore the shooty dog thing.

Maybe it's me, but I like the left one much better... the black at the bottom of the right gives it a "cramped" feel. Lou.

"..... and that was when things got interestiing."

Left in my opinion.

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right...

The left one. It looks more professional :)

Left.

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And in my final hours - I would cling rather to the tattooed hand of kindness - than the unblemished hand of hate...

Well if this is about the elephant then the left......

if it is about the education then the right......

if it is about the stinky part then the left.....

if it is about being a top of an animal then the right.....

If it is about you and your need to have an answer........  geee  I don't know....

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Personally I would go for the right and go for some middle ground and make the black with some transparancy.

*if it is about the education then the right......

if it is about the stinky part then the left.....

if it is about being a top of an animal then the right.....*

on the other hand.....if it's about height you could try a giraffe!

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Left or an alternate background on the right as croowe suggested. Good job! Best; dan

How about a compromise and use the left, but edge the white text with black or have a black drop shadow, to make it stand out more.

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Either one would work for me, but you need more of a margin on the sides -- you have the text too close to the edges.

Maybe you can make a compromise... something loosely based on this effect (see image I attached

That way you have a more uniform background so that the stands out and is legible, but it doesn't split the picture. Hopefully makes it flow little better. Mine is quck and dirty mockup, so the quality is poor, and you can choose a better looking brown or make other improvements.

I agree with what others said about the text, more margin would look good :)
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I agree with previous response. The left version with a greater margin around the text, and a darker brown at the bottom would be best.

Thanks for the tips everyone, heres the new version.  Margins increased, spelling errors fixed, and a browny background for the bottom text.

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Ignore the shooty dog thing.

The one on the left if you make the margin between the top of the text to the elephant the same as between the the bottom of the text to the bottom of the page.

Do'nt go anywhere near the one on the right!

...I swear the last two posts wer'nt there a minute ago!...

There you go!