I submitted this character for V4 to Daz a while ago.  After seeing the sample images, Daz turned her down.  They said that they liked parts of it, but it wasn't something they were looking for at that time. I later asked what it was they felt needed improvement.  The answer was the face and eyes.

Since then, I've done some major work on the eyes at least, and I'm going to try submitting the character again very soon.  Before I do, I'd like to get some advice from the pros.  Is she ready for Daz's scrutiny?  If not, what specifically needs improvement?  Any feedback will be greatly appreciated.

Thanks!