deadman67 opened this issue on Nov 18, 2008 · 7 posts
deadman67 posted Tue, 18 November 2008 at 4:15 PM
judyk posted Tue, 18 November 2008 at 4:55 PM
I think it's a very promising image, with strong composition and a good POV. The first thing I would do if I were you is to texture your foreground buildings, as they are the stars of your show. They need good wall textures and some glass in the windows to make the scene even more realistic. The road texture is also a bit reflective, but maybe you meant it to have a wet look?
I think if you work on the textures this has every chance of ending up as a first-class image.
AnnieD posted Tue, 18 November 2008 at 5:05 PM
I agree about the texturing...and the pic is great!
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deadman67 posted Tue, 18 November 2008 at 5:33 PM
thanks for your comments i have been looking for the right texture for the street and as for the buildings im not sure what i want to use
bobbystahr posted Tue, 18 November 2008 at 6:43 PM
I agree with Judyk and I'd put bit of time into establishing some scale for the non building items...the post box and I'm assuming te fire kiosk thing further up the street seem way large for the scene and a bit out of proportion to themselves...at least the blue post box...a really good start tho.. ...
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tom271 posted Tue, 18 November 2008 at 7:54 PM
I agree with the assessments so far...
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wildman2 posted Wed, 19 November 2008 at 12:37 AM
This scene has potential.Scaling of the objects s/b corrected as noted earlier.Texture on the older bldgs would be nice but it's in the early stages of creation, a light brownish large block type texture may look good.Lighting needs to be addressed seems too evenly lit.Real good start though.Just needs some tweeking.Do you have stuff to put inside the windows of the old bldgs like a coffee shop stuff.Not sure what your going for,old but very well kept or old and beatup and about to be replaced with bldgs of the type in the background.Grungy trash strune or pristine.
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