Attached Link: Emberglow-2g: 1st Tryst: Undressing

This is the 1st time that I've tried to put my Graphic Novel into a concise form for reading. I'd like to hear both thought, impressions, and suggestions as to how to improve the format. I despise word balloons in comics, as they tend to hide the action.

I'd also like to give personal thanks to my Co-Arthor in this venture Nanette Tredoux, and also to RobynsVeil for her kind and generous support, both physical and spiritual. Without either of you, my dear ladies, this work would not have gotten this far!
Yours truly,
David P. Hoadley

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